AMAZING! I couldn’t put this story down.

Thank-you for sharing such an original story with us. The beauty of fanfiction is that it will take a seemingly outrageous idea and make it seem totally sensible. Not just sensible but a probable, haunting, and effective story woven by your effortless writing. Reading the story stirs up many emotions but, most of all, I thank-you for making me feel that I’m not alone.

oh wow...i swear, someone should make this into a movie. your writing is amazing. thank you

A truly wonderful tale, though the ending is certainly bittersweet. You have a great talent, thank you for writing!

omg what a cliff hanger! this whole story has been such a rollercoaster of emotions. my heart broke from Khan on that beach, failing once again. And being sent into the future together...eeepp lol. I can't believe there is only one chapter left!

You weave such a gorgeous story, I can't begin to do justice for it in a simple review. The details, actions and dialogue are top notch and I'm envious of your ability! Thank you so much for writing this story and I just can't wait to see how it ends.

wow, so far it's been a breath taking ride you've taken me on. Your writing is outstanding and so enjoyable. I think you capture these characters beautifully! can't wait to read the rest.

Wow! I cannot imagine what the end was like before (when it was seen as too sad and dark) if this was the result after your editing.
There are few fanfics I can recall where I cried as much as I did with this one. For Sherlock to die alone without even speaking to Molly one last time (which Sherlock granted Khan in the past timeline), after the long lonely life he lived all for her sake, just broke me completely. I think it tore me up more than all my anguish for Khan, because he now gets to live a life with her a second time when Sherlock never got a first time.
Bringing in the lines about Molly's "type" was genius, because it fit so perfectly.
This was an extraordinary story and you are an incredibly talented writer. Thank you!

You have such a gift for writing details and incredible descriptions in every part of this story. In particular, every time Khan reflects on the loss of his family, additional details are revealed and my heart breaks even more for him.

OMG! I have no idea where this is headed, but I love it! I'm an emotional wreck over this story. Khan's love for Molly is so beautiful that anytime he talks about her, or with her, I'm in tears.
Your writing in this story is incredible! Thank you so much.

The emotion during the mind-meld was incredible. I know this was written first, but it reminded me of the coffin scene from Series 4.

Another wonderful chapter. Sherlock and John feel very authentic in tone and language.

I want Khan to be happy, he deserves that, so I hope he finds what he's looking for.

This chapter broke me. The scenes on the beach left me heartbroken and crying. I was crushed when Khan experienced the deja vu of being helpless to save Molly again and him thinking that she hated him. :(

My poor Khan! I don't want him to disappear. :(