Well, that was a little bit depressing. Especially how Mei took Hilda's place, except she didn't. I like how you used the story of the game in here, it works very well.
Thank you for writing this, it was an interesting read, and keep writing!

Amazing sadness. Loved it. N was mourning and he turned accidentally cruel. Nice touch making Mei and Touko sisters.

Perfect. Your writing was just... perfect.. oh gosh, what's a better word? Excellence? Beautiful? Breathtaking?

I have never read a story for Pokemon with this great imagery. Your words literary paint their own meaning with the way you use them. There are things to be read in between the lines, different meanings can arise from just one sentence. A writing like this, with so much meaning and imagery, I have not seen since Munto. I really enjoyed reading it and interpreting it.

Gorgeous story.

well-written one-shot.