Reviews for A Shot in the Dark
One Lonely Marauder chapter 28 . 7/26/2019
I'm ever so certain you may not read this, considering how long it's been since publication, however I still feel the need to let you know the ride you've taken me on. It was a journey filled with anger, and sadness, and goosebumps, and hope, and desperation, and it hit too close to home with the school shooting and the suicide. I went on my own little journey down memory lane with this story, and I want to thank you for your ability to paint a world so vividly that it can be experienced as if it's really happening around you.

"She will be loved"? That song gives me goosebumps when I hear it, and hearing it in this context made it even better. I'm so sad that Curly had to die, and I'm so heart broken for Helga. In a way I guess I'm glad Wolfgang kind of... came around? you never think that someone like him, or Rhonda, could have a...real side? A human side? But he did, and I sincerely hope he was able to heal and find peace/comfort in the world again, no matter how angry I was at him at first.

I'm still worried about Rhonda though, I kept getting the feeling that she was edging towards her own dramatic ending, and I really you didn't have those intentions. She's a flighty bitch sometimes, but even she deserves some sort of happy ending. Maybe..

Anyways, now that I've analyzed a fanfiction about a fictional story... I'm going to go back to work and try to focus, but I don't think I'll be able to.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/16/2019
Is it weird that this is the perfect balance of sorrow in a plot? It absolutely horribly sad, but still.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/16/2019
Awwww, poor Arnold...but Helgas reasoning does make sense
Guest chapter 14 . 7/10/2018
I always refused to use crutches and used a wheelchair instead
Guest chapter 19 . 1/22/2018
Vulnerable making out
Guest chapter 15 . 1/22/2018
I refused to use crutches at 16 when I broke my leg and my parents bought me a wheelchair because crutches suck
Guest chapter 14 . 1/22/2018
I refused to use crutches when I broke my leg,
Guest chapter 13 . 1/22/2018
I personally hate aid
Guest chapter 12 . 1/22/2018
Why the hell, why
Guest chapter 10 . 1/22/2018
I don’t think Helga would be that happy over flowers. Sexist much
SeraphinaDreamer chapter 2 . 8/11/2017
Helga will never completely give up on Arnold. I refuse to believe it.
SeraphinaDreamer chapter 1 . 8/11/2017
Poor Curly. My poor psychotic baby. Show that Wolfgang that he can't and won't mess with you.
surferbabe2019 chapter 27 . 5/28/2017
No schools go until the middle of June.
Milkyrosebud chapter 12 . 1/29/2017
Really bad timing to confess your feelings Arnold. And Helga -face palm-
Jasper'sDarlinBunny chapter 28 . 11/27/2016
I'm late and I don't care! I had my doubts about this story because I try to avoid extra drama, but it was so beautiful! Helga crying over missing curly had me in tears, and curly himself... his pain and torment... Rhonda and her guilt, it was a spectacular story that deserves more reviews and a few awards as well. Best HA fic I've read. Thank you
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