The story has a great deal of potential. It's unfortunate that you've abandoned it. I would've loved to see where it went. Also a piece of advice, don't write stories depending on reviews to keep you writing. Sometimes readers don't have anything to say sometimes they feel no need to see anything others still they don't like reviewing. All you as a writer can do is write for you not your readers.

Omake(?): One carried new intelligence about the aforementioned incidents, and the other?

The other contained a missive from a concerned citizen.

The person requires more information about the 31st of October 1981, and the people involved that night.

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Ssstupid humans. Speaker or no, your doom is nigh! ~ unknown serpent

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Procaticjolt, please continue when you may. :)

had to laugh about ninja beating the bad guys.
ninja are the bad guys. they are mercenarys. they kill, rob, kidnap, destroy for money.

I couldn't even finish this chapter because the grammar was so bad. Also your plot makes zero sense. I almost feel like a couple of chapters must be missing. First you have a cliffhanger chapter about getting a serpent pearl and using it in the English channel but you leave out what happens next. In the next chapter its all about being in some temple and that isn't finished or explained either. This story is really pathetic, and isn't even comprehensible. Plus you rate it K (which is the equivalent of G) but you use the F word and other cuss words. Way to go! its always nice to trick children into reading trash. Why not just go around giving out po rn to elementary kids too (in case your too ignorant that was sarcasm.) You should be ashamed of yourself.

Well, it seems that the wizarding world and Dumbles will be too busy paying attention to Harry. Will the most powerful wizards be killed as well. Gaara said the most powerful so would that include Dumbles and Voldie? Here's to hoping. lol

That's a different way for Harry to find out that his parents were murdered as well as the horcrux. Assuming Naruto removes the soul piece, Dumbles reaction to the curse scar not being cursed would be great!

Nice how you used Figg's blindness to Harry's benefit as well as Dumbles. It wouldn't surprise me if the wards became much stronger than canon since he will be much happier and healthier.

Nice, he'll no longer have to put up with the Dursley's. That and he won't have to deal with them being mad at him doing well in school so he won't have it ingrained in him to hold back. Since he lives close to the Dursley's, does that mean that the bloodwards will still work? Will Figg tell Dumbles seeing that he is actually happy or will she miss the change somehow?

Yes! I can't wait to see how Harry and Sasuke change one another. They BOTH need to change their attitudes and thinking. Canon Harry had no self esteem and took any insult unless it was about his parents or friends. No self worth at all. Hopefully he won't be led around the nose at Hogwarts. If he is, Harry would be the worst ninja in history. lol

So will we be seeing alot of Naruto from here on out or just as one time visit?

i really liked how you used tsukyomi for training purposes.

so then, do you plan on advancing harry to the point where he's old enough to attend hogwarts? or are u taking this story elsewhere?

-TCM

eagerly awaiting the next chapter! !

really enjoyed this!

great story!

hahaha more

hope you skip to hogwarts and dumbel bashing