Shadow- it's great! I like their game
Isy- really awesome chapter, can't wait for more

O.m.g this got updated?! AHJKDSHJSGHdghf thank you so much! This is one of my fav fics and I was so gutted it never continued...could this mean there's more to come?! Ahh I sure hope so! Ughh their flirting is just...god damn smexy! They can only play coy for so long! dsjhg sorry this is a spaz review...I'm just so excited! _ Thank you for the update! :D x

I liked this way more than I thought I would. You win! I lose. XD

I love the sassy power-play between these two sooo much. Despite adding dialogue, I think you still kept up the feel of the first chapter, that tangible, calculating sort of tension. It was always pretty heartbreaking to me that this story only had the one, neverendingly frustrating chapter, haha. So, glad to see you are continuing it, at least in some fashion! :)

man this fanfic is totally addictive (just like all your thiefshipping fanfics!)! I'd love to draw some fanart! 3
In any case, there should totally be many more chapters because this is too darn good to finish here!
pweaaasuuuu *3*

So cute!

please don't leave it at a oneshot please im begging you to continue!

Great story.

Ugh this was SO GOOD. That's a happy ugh. It's a "oh I'm so hungover all I wanted was a good story to read before a nap and I just got one" ugh. The best part of this fic is that you really made me feel how much the two want each other, but also how much they enjoy the teasing, which both makes the fact that it ends with them still teasing both so much more frustrating AND so much more satisfying for me as a reader, too. It really sucked me in.