Brutal, sometimes there is no HEA. Or maybe this is it considering their circumstances. I’m ugly crying!

It was one of the best fanfictions I've ever read ...make me cry so so much..i've never expected to be end it like this but it was really tragidic ..it's just like "when you have the life, you don't have the reason to live it and then, someone comes and you wanted to live but that life get snachted away from you " It was a great story .

I'm a hardcore HEA girl but I have to be honest, I kind of accept the ending here.. even though I'm partially sad.

Dang... I didn’t think it would end this way. :( But then again, what kind of life would they have had and that of the child? Still, the story was great. Great imagination. It was slow reading since English isn’t your first language but you did good, just way too many F-bombs that weren’t necessary.

You know, overusing obscenities is a sign of poor writing and does nothing to develop a character. Few young women of Bella's ilk cuss as much as she does in this. Try writing like an adult instead of like a pompous teenager.

a sad ending,i hope they find happiness in the afterlife

What the hell?! Please make them have a happier ending like, them surviving and having the baby and things like that,but not this. Please! this is making me sad please I need a better ending.

I think bella is a gross whore. talk about EASY

I loved the story wished they didnt die tho

It doznt av to end lyk that u kno

Why! Oh I love this story but that was messed up, at least they died together knowing they love each other.

Sad,but you did a good job!

I'm glad someone announced the major character death in the end smh, I'm sure your ideas were great and I'll probably end up reading one or more of your other stories at some point, but if it's not HEA, I'm not reading it. if I wanted a tragic ending to someone else's tale, I'd watch the news.

Holy shit, I didn't think Bella would die. I just loathe that Rosalie got in the middle of their final moments together. Why is it okay for Rosalie to live? She not only killed Bella but her unborn child. I just wish the couple somehow survived, maybe they were taken to a hospital?

it is so unnecessary to have a f word in literally every sentence. Way too much