Reviews for Fractured
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8
Dawn here I thought I found a good crossover but nope it's a 3 way crossover goddammit
LastManStanding616 chapter 37 . 7/8/2017
Slow start but it became great just after the first half ended
WillItWork chapter 39 . 10/20/2016
Wow, that ending got dark, fast! I'm glad to see you pulled it out, with a bittersweet redemption — that's very Star Wars, and a little Mass Effect.

It's always interesting to hear about other people's Shepards. My feeling has been ‘guides are intel’, and tried to do everything as optimally as possible. Admittedly, a failing Sam Shepard is more interesting, especially in the crapsack world of Borderlands.

Thanks for sharing, and I'm looking forward to reading Origins.
Zoe Walker chapter 31 . 10/8/2016
Crush, kill, burn?
codybob chapter 7 . 9/4/2016
"Battle-worn batarians, lacking in humility" is this a reference to miracle of sound? If so then
Turians a braggin' bout their reach and flexibility
The clutter of the cities spreads to the loneliest stars

But no matter what scars you bear
Whatever uniform you wear
You can fight like a Krogan, run like a leopard
But you'll never be better than Commander Shepard
hunter 139 chapter 19 . 2/28/2016
Sparatus really was the problem in the main games. I think it's safe to say he was the most hated Councilor in Mass Effect (though of course, all of them were hated).

Nice to see him get humbled for once.
hunter 139 chapter 28 . 2/28/2016
Damn, Shepard's rant was both hilarious and true.
Mangahero18 chapter 5 . 11/29/2015
Aww its less fun if they KNOW about the wider galaxy but keep it secret
Noctofuriens chapter 7 . 11/16/2015
"Battle-worn Batarians, lacking in humility"
And that was the exact moment I knew this fic would slide its way into my favorites. Your humor is drier than the Atacama, which is just the way I like it.
I'm going to enjoy this immensely, aren't I?
guest chapter 6 . 10/26/2015
Is the religiously motivated anti technology group supposed to be a Warhammer 40K reference?
FanWyrme chapter 6 . 10/25/2015
Your scale is all wrong. You stated that the Curator class star ships are 2,500 kilometers long. Most dreadnoughts are 800 meters to 1 kilometer long. The destiny ascension, the largest dreadnought in the ME universe, is approximately 2.8 kilometers long. Therefore, the Curator class star ships out class everything in the ME universe
Chronus1326 chapter 31 . 10/15/2015
Just getting this far in the trilogy. You skip or provide very little info on very important parts. I thought I missed the Quarians and get making peace, I think that deserved more then you gave it. Same thing with the aftermath of the Ambush on Reverent, you never told us about the damage, after-action report. Does she hold together? Good to use as a battlestation? Did the reactor blow?
Still followed and gonna read all three. Love your plot. Are your Halo references purposeful? Cuz I love them!
nobodez chapter 3 . 8/4/2015
interesting story so far, but you've got a continuity error, the Starlight Wanderer left the TGA before they'd settled on the "Mass Pulsar" nickname for the Relays, which means that instead of commanding "Let's head for that mass pulsar" in the final section, Captain Erickson should have said "Let's head for that 'blue ball' construct", since that was the nickname used in the first Starlight Wanderer section.
ColdFang chapter 18 . 6/19/2015
I love the Kreig jokes. Especially the one at the end from the Assault on Dragon's Keep.
Eipok chapter 1 . 2/21/2015
"to take down the rouge, Reaper-following Saren"

That is hilarious, but should really be fixed. Saren didn't wear rouge.
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