OMG IT'S SO HOT

Thanks for writing this story!

For all the people that are saying "eww" or "why would he say that" just leave. You are obviously not mature enough to handle it. The title says "Dirty talking Edward entry" you have to be a retard not to get what it's about. If you are not into this kind of stuff then don't read it. It's simple as that. Stop ruining the fanfic for the people who do enjoy it.

First off this is fucking gross...Edward is fucking gross. If he was a old fat dude those woman would be turning his ass in for sexual harassment. From the sounds of it that's exactly what needs to happen, lucky for Edward bella is a easy little whore that likes her men extremely used up!

He says he cant give bella candles and soft music...why the fuck not? His fingers broken? cant turn on a stereo? cant light some candles? its too complicated...or he cant do it because its just too much effort? whores are easier huh Edward? well your in luck bella doesn't need that shit cause shes a whore too!

Holy crap. I love his dirty mouth. So amazing

This was a fun story.

I liked it. The virgin, the womanizer, all good :)

really great
very hot i do love a dominating Edward with a really filthy mouth ...

I worked at a bank, so I can imagine my husband in this fic.

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Omg I loved it. Wold love for it to be a story!

Oh man, that is some boss! Made me lol ! Hot o/s!

He was definitely a dirty talker!

I liked it!

Good job! Solid writing and kudos to your beta! It would have been nice to see more of an evolution with Edward, but with a o/s, there's only so much you can do.

You certainly used the theme well! That was smokin' hot!

Good luck!

Good luck!