Loving this very much keep this sweet work up

This was so dark and gritty, and I loved every moment of it. I'm off to read the sequel!

This was pretty good. I am excited to read the sequel.

So Yea was not expecting this twist. This story really turned out different than I imagined. Plus I thought that weird creature would be a bit more perverted. Or maybe he just seemed to be at first. Hmmm this does not bode well for them at all.

Interesting so Vegeta is relaying information. Whether it is accurate or false information it is a fascinating twist to be sure. I wonder how this will play out.

You know I'll have to admit most of this was full of cliche. Him being warm and all. Shocks felt through her body just at his touch, etc. But you actually had Bulma say something quite profound here I was surprised. It was about never being rejected on Earth. And the only person capable of rejecting her being Vegeta. I had never thought about it that way. I was actually quite shocked. Perhaps that's why she wants him so much in canon because she can have anyone else(excluding Goku).

Not going to lie the metaphysical stuff really doesn't match the tone of the story well. Then again I've only completed a third of it. I'd prefer to stick to the survival tale with questionable morality much like BR is. But we'll see what comes next.

So she finally got in the game. Well took her long enough. Despite what everyone says about morals, survival instinct always kicks in. A human's fight or flight instinct is incredibly strong. I'd say the only unrealistic thing so far is the water. Not a big deal really but the water should have been a way bigger issue earlier. 2 days without water is about the max a person can go. Food is kind of secondary because it takes weeks to starve from food.

Pretty awesome. They are about to confront a team that has killed another for a dragonball too. So they are no pushovers. Or should not be anyway. I'm very curious to see which team it is. And more importantly which warrior it is.

Interesting choice of villain. Not necessarily a Frieza villain. I would have thought it to be Cui. But Vegeta killed Pui Pui in the Buu Saga so why not? Though I don't think canon Vegeta would be a match for him at this point. Well it's not really clear since he blasted him away easily enough in the Buu Saga. So it's debatable. Still one unexpected twist and I'm hoping for more.

So call me crazy but I love this idea. I am a huge fan of BR. Not so much BR 2. Well the first half of the second film was awesome. I'm glad to see you took the best part of the second film and put it in your story. The partners idea was so unique. I think their heads exploded if they got 100 meters apart. Or if their partner died. It was pretty awesome. Right up until they took the collars off. So you went with anklets. We'll see how that plays out. I'm hoping for a wickedly dark tale of sex, murder, and betrayal just like the original BR was.

This was a wonderful story and it's hard to believe I've never read it before now. Always so dang late to the party...

Seriously, amazing story! I have been reading other stories but I stopped because they didnt hold my attention until the end, contrary to your work... I am so glad there is a sequel.

I hope Vegeta and Bulma reconcile soon :D... Goku is doing well hehe

Aw... I like seeing Goku helping Vegeta! I hope Freeza didnt totally brainwash him