Reviews for The breakup |
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bowlfullofcherries chapter 1 . 2/18 Hooray! Loved this. I’ve been looking for a ‘fed up’ story that seemed plausible. Excellent. |
Ria chapter 1 . 10/25/2015 I feels so real |
Natalie san chapter 1 . 2/19/2014 I think you should write more! |
miikodesu chapter 1 . 1/13/2014 that's so sweet... akane is more "brave" than ranma :D hahahahaaa... |
crimsontears82684 chapter 1 . 1/3/2014 This was a good story. There are a few minor grammatical errors but nothing major. I would have liked to see an expansion on how the other fiancés reacted and also how Ryoga would have been. Overall, though, good one-shot. |
Monty chapter 1 . 9/6/2013 Hey it's a really nice story, I liked it very much, thank you! |
Teddy's Circus chapter 1 . 8/29/2013 Really good but you should really post the kiss scene :) |
RanmaBuff chapter 1 . 8/16/2013 I love this pairing so much, and you describe them really well. Good job |
Anna chapter 1 . 8/16/2013 I love all your stories, so sweeeeet |
samp.k chapter 1 . 8/12/2013 Haha sogood ! I like seeing ranma suffer a bit, he always has the girls chasing after him ! Time to put some efforts ;) thx for the story |
PiNkBuN17 chapter 1 . 8/12/2013 I really love this! It gave Ranma a good wake up call! I wish you add more! |
jdcocoagirl chapter 1 . 8/9/2013 cute... and funny how ranma burns in jealousy but atleast he did not kill the boy who went out on a date with akane. or he will since he run out... |
kana chapter 1 . 8/8/2013 lol they're still children. fun read. thank you |
afgsh chapter 1 . 8/8/2013 Haha this was really really good! You wrote a really cute story line :). Love the ending, not too fluffy but perfectly still it's Ranma and Akane. Nice job :D. |
caia-chan chapter 1 . 8/8/2013 I'm happy you come back with this beautiful one-shot! It's so cute. |