Reviews for The breakup
bowlfullofcherries chapter 1 . 2/18
Hooray! Loved this. I’ve been looking for a ‘fed up’ story that seemed plausible. Excellent.
Ria chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
I feels so real
Natalie san chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
I think you should write more!
miikodesu chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
that's so sweet... akane is more "brave" than ranma :D hahahahaaa...
crimsontears82684 chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
This was a good story. There are a few minor grammatical errors but nothing major. I would have liked to see an expansion on how the other fiancés reacted and also how Ryoga would have been. Overall, though, good one-shot.
Monty chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
Hey it's a really nice story, I liked it very much, thank you!
Teddy's Circus chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Really good but you should really post the kiss scene :)
RanmaBuff chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
I love this pairing so much, and you describe them really well. Good job
Anna chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
I love all your stories, so sweeeeet
samp.k chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Haha sogood ! I like seeing ranma suffer a bit, he always has the girls chasing after him ! Time to put some efforts ;) thx for the story
PiNkBuN17 chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
I really love this! It gave Ranma a good wake up call! I wish you add more!
jdcocoagirl chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
cute... and funny how ranma burns in jealousy but atleast he did not kill the boy who went out on a date with akane. or he will since he run out...
kana chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
lol they're still children. fun read. thank you
afgsh chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Haha this was really really good! You wrote a really cute story line :). Love the ending, not too fluffy but perfectly still it's Ranma and Akane. Nice job :D.
caia-chan chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
I'm happy you come back with this beautiful one-shot! It's so cute.
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