THAT WAS A GREAT STORY! but some of the other romances were way off. )

One of the best love story I have read so far. You got talent :)

dude!

love it!

can you make more?

I loved it it's the sweetist thing I have ever read.

You aren't an writer...YOU'RE A GOD! *bows to you* I'm a big MetabeeXBrass fan. This story is so cute! *screams like a little girl*

hey why did you stop it!it's okay...

You ought to do something about that LONG chapter thing.

Nice.

W...W...WOW! WAS THAT LONG OR WHAT!

Fadence: HAHAH! YOU PC FROZE HALF WAY WILL IT WAS LOADING! *points and laughs continueisly*

Very funny...Anyway, the fic was great. At least the parts I was able to read... *slams Fadence into the computer* Well, me likey. I belive I've reviewed for the sequal. So...I hope they continue. ~

OHHHHHHHHHH, Jedi-And! This is such a good story you have here... But... Here are some advices:

1- Try to split this story in chapters. I read MOST of the story, but no all, because it was too damn long! With that, you get more readers, and reviews too _~

2- Try to space more your text... I can't read your story without getting at least a bit confused... ! (just exemple, because I can't express myself here XP)

3- Split more your speechs... One paragraph for Brass' speech, one for Metabee's... I know I myself don't do it regurlary, but, as I said before, this story is almost without paragraphs!

4- Not Icky, sweety, it's Ikki.

Okay? Try to do it! I'll be more than pleased to read this story again, if you split it in chapters and do what I suggested! I like your stories, you know, and this one is very good too! The only problems are those up there! Okay? Well, see ya then! _

Sorry, it seems my reivew didn't show up. Oh well.

Very cute and great action. Also made sense. Nice plot as well. Just work on your spelling. That's all. I'm typing up my update for Medabots Meets Chatters as we speak!

Very Kawaii!

That was good yeah. Though Metabee is spelled Metabee, not Medabee (it's short for Metal-Beetle actually).

I enjoyed this! Centurion's cool! My only beef is that Ikki's name is spelled wrong.