You just keep putting out good stuff. I love the mating concept! it's so interesting and original. I get were Madi is coming from, I mean she was just thrown into a new universe where she has no idea what is happening and she had bugs injected into her against her will. In my personal opinion, she has every right to freak out, sure she might have done it to the wrong person but I don't think Shibi should hold it against her. I'm also curious as to what the 'Wolf, ladybug, and butterfly' thing was all about. I hope you gain inspiration to continue this story in the future. Just know that I absolutely love it!

Because I REEEEEEEEAAAAALLY want to read more of this story (and please, don't mind my crudeness)... where the ever loving flying FUCK is the next chapter?!

Author-sama~help me read more of this before I diiiiiieeeee... *anime tears*

This is written really well, I hope some day you decide to finish it!

Oh boy! She pissed off Shibi pretty good. What a rotten beginning for everyone. I hope you write more soon.

To me, you've done a pretty good job. I really don't mind what kind of style of writing you do as long the plot of the story matches and very well written details are put into play. That's what makes the story kind of pop if you know what i mean. However, there is some mistakes in the spelling or if you reread it some should be like for example exactly instead of exact. Just a heads up on making words work if you want more readers. I'm not good either in mine own stories but i have gotten better i guess. Um, let's see...so far the plot of the story is going well...you can if you want too, not saying you have to do it...but it can help. Showing the two girls there affection more into the story can bring out more viewers and also it'll draw the spices of the action packed stuff towards it in a way. If you do decide to want to try it out...let me know and i'll help you on it. Thank you for the dedication for your story. I just like to help others do their best in stories if i can at least. Anyways good luck with the story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Aaawwww T-T I read all the chapters out. *pouts* Now what am I gonna do to procrastinate?
Great story man! I can't wait to read more!

Oh man, I was so into this chapter all O_O xD I got to "cliffhanger" and went all DAMN IT
then I realized I could just go to the next chapter, hahahaha! Good job! And man, I totally agree with this girl like, o.o why buy movie theater food when you can just sneak in your own? xD I don't want to spend 30 dollars on a small popcorn!

Awesome chapter! Love kiba so much haha!

good chapter. love how you brought donna's will power to talk to shino's dad. Awesome.

lol kiba's funny

It was really good start on the smexiness.

Awesome chapter! Love how you made the mysterious kiss for Donna. I believe it was shino. HAHa. Love how you brought kiba to notice he is falling for heaven. _ Great job!

WTF just happened o_O ?

So Shino's father likes the girl after all :)
Can't wait to see what will happen next

Awesome chapter! I still would like to see some Kiba Inuzuka action too! haha. It's nice to see Shino being so carefree and showing emotions about this girl. I'm happy someone is writing about shino even though i'm not a big fan of bugs. HAHA. I do amit that it's a good story line. Now i have a question. Is Heaven fall in love with Kiba? That would be fun to see. Keep up with the good work and I understand about the school homework and stuff. I'm in college as well and have not much time to write. Plus my laptop has a lose wire in the charging area and i need to take it to the shop. I don't have much money to do it so i'm trying to save up money if i can. It sucks badly and i have to save everything i have on my laptop sometime soon to do again. It's like 3% left of the stupid battery left on it. I'll have to do it sometime soon. LOL anyways just wanted to let you know that your not alone about having to write and school crap. If you need any suggestions just message me and i'm hear for you. I'll do my best to do my story as well. Please if you have the time, take a look. Thanks. Kibainuzukalover145 _