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   Primus2021 chapter 6 . 8/7/2016 1 Peter - Spiderman 2 Ava - White Tiger 3 Sam - Nova 4 Luke - Power man 5 Danny - Iron fist 6 Max - Aracnager, who was the 7th in Phil's office? 7 Johnny - Human torch, who was the 8th that left with them? |
| Abi chapter 6 . 1/5/2014 Hey great story u now u should really continue |
| lauralina chapter 6 . 12/17/2013 This chapter was great, but, your writting is very confusing, and difficult to read. |
| Spider-Man chapter 6 . 11/30/2013 Dang this is getting really intense. Please continue this is just awesome. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2013 we all know white tigers powers come from an amulet |
| Mimicry chapter 5 . 11/5/2013 Glad I could help with the name even though it wasn't exact loving the story can't wait till the next chapter keep up the great work |
| Mimicry chapter 4 . 8/12/2013 I love your story I think Max's hero name should be like arachni-tiger or something like that but anyway keep up the great work |
| flying feather scribbles chapter 4 . 8/11/2013 Again, the writing is a bit confusing, but you got the point across. :-) I like how you actually know what movements such as a sweep or uppercut are and use the correct terminology. ;-) I'd suggest going back to edit, though, and run it through a word processor. |
| flying feather scribbles chapter 3 . 8/11/2013 Tad confusing. |
| flying feather scribbles chapter 2 . 8/11/2013 Hey! Thanks for the update! Spidey's new suit sounds pretty cool - but how can you see the spider embelm on the back if he now has a cape? I noticed many spelling/capitalization mistakes. I'd suggest typing up your chapters on Word, or Open Office (which is free) to fix that. Also, whenever a new person starts speaking, you usually should start a new paragraph. I didn't think that all of the background was necessary, since most people reading this know the show. I thought your summary of Danny's past was rather confusing. I liked how you said Ava was someone Peter could relate to & explained why. Oh, btw, you switched POV's and tenses in the middle of the chapter, so you might want to go back & fix that. Otherwise, nice chapter! Keep writing! :-) -FFS |
| Spider-Man chapter 4 . 8/11/2013 Congrates an excellent chapter nice name for there son by the way Ps:Thanks for telling me your age |
| Spider-Man chapter 3 . 8/11/2013 In a way that is there child i see your going to make it so Peter and Ava take care of the child and raise it as there own |
| Spider-Man chapter 2 . 8/11/2013 How old are you. I see where you got that ninite made suit idea your not the only one. I have also seen Spider-Man Unlimited |
| cabrera1234 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013 hope to see more soon |
| flying feather scribbles chapter 1 . 8/11/2013 O.o wow, intriguing start! |
