Amazing how she demands to go with deeks wheb he goes to talk about his problems shes only doing that because she wants to know everything

Dont like kensi and she has poor communication skills too but deeks never lashed out at her because unlike her Deeks isn't an aggressive person

OMG. This this THIS! Make me blubber in all the wonderful ways! Part of me wonders if they may have gone this direction a bit if it weren't for DR's pregnancy and maternity leave. Oh well... wishful thinking. This will be canon in my head though. Shhh... hahaha
So beautiful!

This is a lovely story, and so well written. Thanks for sharing.

Really Great!

Wonderful story. Good characterization. Brilliant job. :)

Very nicely done! Love getting into Deeks' mind post-torture. I had the please of meeting Mel at the Fan Meet; yes, she's wonderful!

Just Perfect!

Okay, I will be totally honest with you, I read the synopsis and wasn't sure I wanted to read the story. I tend to be pretty skeptical when it comes to people's interpretations of how canon things are going to play out.
So believe me when I say this blew me away. Holy crap. Everything about it was just.../right/. I feel like you portrayed the characters very realistically and honestly. The story itself was written beautifully, and I found it really believable. Fantastic job!

I love this ending. I think it comes around in the perfect way, and it offers a different point of view of Deeks and Kensi and also of Sam and what he's going through. Nobody is quite as perceptive as Hetty and she's a wonderful character to bring balance to this story. You did an amazing job with this story and I would love to see something like this become reality on the show.

This was just amazing.

I really enjoyed this ending! I like that you didn't do anything sappy and fluffy, because that's probably not what would happen in real life. I enjoyed that this was realistic. Wonderful chapter!

Amazingly written. And while I think you did a great job on especially Sam and Deeks, Hetty's voice in the story was simply perfect! :) thanks so much for posting this

Ok...I'm convinced you write for the show. Your words are very true to the characters, especially Hetty. Fantastic story!

I just found this story and I must say that you did an amazing job with it. I think we could see something very similar to this on the actual show. I am ridiculously happy that we are just a couple of weeks away from seeing how the writers resolve the cliffhanger. Thanks so much for sharing your ideas!