Brilliant story. So original. Thanks for sharing.

A different kind of Chuck story. Good chapter.

The spastic colon excuse rears it's head. I laughed so hard my husband is looking at me like I've lost it.

A truly magnificent story

Top ten Chuck story for sure. I've read it several times and it is amazing each time. Thank you for writing it.

Amazing story. Loved it. full of emotions. Chuck and Sarah both were amazing.

That was really engrossing. I was completely sucked in by your interpretation of the Chuck story. There was a lot to like and only a few things I didn't like. One minor thing that I loved, I was glad you had Chuck want to be called Chuck at the end there because I was really having problems with thinking of Chuck as Charles.

I have been reading for six hours pretty much straight, and while I wanted to leave a longish review I have nothing left.

Awesome job. Thanks for sharing.

Good stuff. The first date banter didn't make the most sense but good stuff overall.

I am super interested to see how different some really great moments of the show differ in you universe. I'm sure some things will be bang on, I am just looking forward to the more subtle shifts.

This is a very cool Idea. Good job.

That was so much better than the concept made it sound to me. I really enjoyed that first chapter. Thnx.

Really liked this story and the AU it's set in. Plus, you're a very, very good writer. It makes me sad that you've left the Chuck fandom. I always enjoy Sarah centric stories. I love Chuck to death, but Sarah seems more interesting to me. I felt Schwedek under used and even neglected her at times, so I welcome stories that try to develop her character. Thanks.

Just found this, and it was great. A lot like some of the other reviewers, I was a bit skeptical when the twist was first revealed, but I'm glad I stuck with this, because it was a fantastic read. Everything from the pacing to your characterizations were great. A little disappointed you've never written a sequel, but I really enjoyed the conclusion you brought this to.

Wow, what a story...and quite unique in the way it was approached. I have to admit, I was nervous when this story started. the idea that Chuck Bartowski was not real made me wonder how this author would bring the love story together. But, having read several of her other stories already, I felt confident that she would.

This story is all from Sarah's POV, so the majority of the exploration is about how she sees and perceives things. The intriguing thing is that Sarah finds certain aspects of both Charles Carmichael and the 'fictional' Chuck Bartowski very compelling, almost magnetic, but yet she can't quite figure out why she can't feel like herself with either of them. This story shows us exactly how Sarah discovers herself as she discovers just who these two people are.

There are some very neat twists and turns along the way, and some fairly angsty moments. But I would recommend this story highly for any reader looking for a different take on Chuck and Sarah, but that still results in some great Charah goodness. Enjoy.

I was little sceptical about this story at first. But, it turned out to be a beautiful story! Great ending! A sequel would be appreciated.