Reviews for Twisted
JojoJinx chapter 30 . 1/16
I bet it's the horrible psychology professor man. I Mean he spoke with Bella when she trusted him... So he might know about renesmee... And he'd know about the car crash and we know he's powerful
BellaTesoro chapter 15 . 9/1/2019
How much rougher can this ride be?
BellaTesoro chapter 14 . 9/1/2019
Charlie knows about what Jacob and she are doing? How can Charlie be part of this? And Jacob goes all boyfriend all of a sudden and Bella is mad that he kisses her like she was kissing Edward?
BellaTesoro chapter 12 . 9/1/2019
Esme takes their picture...since this whole story has been 'twisted' I'm wondering if she's gathering evidence against Bella. Anyway, so even thought Edward supposedly is the one who drove the car her mother was killed with and she supposedly is trying her hardest to frame somehow she's still in lust with him, her mother's killer? And how does the name of a victim from a fatal accident get squashed? Why would they hide Renee's name from the accident? I'm not going to be able to read anymore of Bella framing Edward yet at the same time falling for him. What kind of person does that?
BellaTesoro chapter 11 . 9/1/2019
I'm trying to hang in there. I thought last chapter was out there in regard to character development but this one explains the mystery it seems. So tell me, how does Edward miss the fact that, if as we are meant to understand it, that Edward killed Bella's mother and crippled Jacob's father in that accident and yet Edward doesn't know who it is that he killed? And no matter that it in the end is not Edward who was driving that car, he would have known it was Bella's mother who died and of course explains why he's at odds with Jake. I know, I know there's plenty more twists to come I'm sure. Don't know if I can take the turns. But goes to show you you've written this mystery very well to get a reader all up in arms about it all.
BellaTesoro chapter 10 . 9/1/2019
Ok, sorta lost me with this chapter. First creating a nude for sculpture for a high school art project probably would never fly given the assignment. Second, Bella transforms into this out of control sexual outburst that seeing Edward manipulate mud to create the female form and she lusts after that alone? Come on, they didn't even touch each other before all this, they'd never sort out their attraction or whatever Bella thought was happening between them and then go for sex from all that? No safe sex actions or talk nothing...yeah teens are hormonal but this was over the top. j/s Bella says she never had self confidence about her body and yet she's self confident enough to strip for this boy she hardly knows but for their team project and getting themselves killed...And Charlie is worried about Bella hanging out with Edward? I think he ought to worry about Bella hanging out with Edward and being the dangerous one. Ok, rant over, this Bella is more than annoying but I take it we'll find out why.
BellaTesoro chapter 9 . 9/1/2019
Bella is annoying and it's no wonder Edward's first response after the LaPush/cliff diving...and finding out that his enemy is Bella's ex...on top of that she almost got them both killed...yeah she's annoying at best. But the unfolding of whatever happened between both Jacob and Bella and then Edward and Jacob is interesting. The 'little detail' about Edward's push back to Jacob about how his wheelchair father was doing and the inferences about him being a Cullen with money to lose...I'm thinking Edward was involved in some kind of accident? Could he be part of Jacob and Bella's story and whatever it is they've gone through? Running to read and find out...
BellaTesoro chapter 8 . 9/1/2019
What an idiotic move to go cliff diving. I thought this Bella had some common sense since she is always talking about living with her cop dad and driving carefully...They get a little wet (and I'm sure it freaking cold since it must be October by now in the story) and Bella decides it's a good idea to get Edward to dive off the cliffs, she doesn't even know if he can swim and she admits she's never done this without Jacob and other more experienced people. And she freezes as she realizes Edward is still in the water somewhere drowning instead of getting Jacob and friends to go in and save him. Good to know Edward walks away from this. And now I'm sure we'll find out why LaPush isn't a place he wants to go.
BellaTesoro chapter 7 . 9/1/2019
Edward is very insightful about his behavior. He at least knows he's doing wrong and like with the Cullens he sits quietly at dinner and trying to appreciate their patience with him. All that he divulged to Bella about his parents show a wounded young man and understandably so but what else is he and she hiding I wonder.
BellaTesoro chapter 6 . 9/1/2019
Who are the other foster kids? I take it they aren't important to the story thus far. I'm wondering like Bella why Edward continues to completely snub her at school. Using natural clay from nature is a good idea for the sculpture.
BellaTesoro chapter 5 . 9/1/2019
This Bella is refreshingly strong and opinionated and although she's pushing the boundaries of getting to know someone who clearly isn't interested in a friendship, I'm sure her intentions are good. I'm so wondering what happened in Edward's life that caused him to be orphaned as a teen and him not being able to drive must enter into all this. I take it Emmett was also an orphan taken in by the Cullens? Bella has gone silent on her own past problems with Jake.
BellaTesoro chapter 4 . 9/1/2019
I see that Bella is right, she's stubborn. It was interesting to see Esme ready to call the school to get Bella out of working with Edward as she foresees problems with that. Edward hearing his new foster parent say that could be on one hand hurtful but maybe he appreciated her trying to get him out of group work. I wonder which was it, Esme protecting Bella or protecting Edward. Hey at least Edward is now resigned and will meet Bella to gather material. (I felt Bella's humiliation after she made Edward's CD's fall off the shelf.)
BellaTesoro chapter 3 . 9/1/2019
If Bella was freaked out by Edward, why volunteer to partner with him? I guess she's got good intentions but really, he's made it clear he's not interested in being civil and she should have listen to Edward's warnings and the art teachers. But of course makes for a good plot.
BellaTesoro chapter 2 . 9/1/2019
It was a nice try on Bella's part to go up to the new boy and try and get to know him. She clearly is arguing with her own actions and reactions to not only him but whatever went down with Jake her long term boyfriend. I like getting to unravel what's what in the story so far.
BellaTesoro chapter 1 . 9/1/2019
I don't usually like high school stories but this one sounds interesting.
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