quick interesting plot

this is sweet how the brothers care as well

I enjoyed the story, but everything was wrapped up a little too quickly in the end, and the Cray plot feels unfinished. I mean, they can't run forever, right? And they wouldn't just be running away from Cray. The authorities would be looking for them too, since they've technically kidnapped Prim. It feels like there should as sequel.

Also, what on earth was going on in chapter 13, with Delly coming out of Peeta's room in the morning, wearing his shirt? Haven't they only been dating for a week? That's pretty fast to be having sex or even just fooling around, even if they've known each other since pre-school. Especially since Peeta isn't even that into her, and the girl he does like sleeps only a few doors down the hall. And was it meant to imply she stayed the night? I guess Papa Mellark only has a problem with Peeta sleeping with a girl when he can't define their relationship lol. Or maybe nothing actually happened, and Delly just barged into Peeta's room in the morning to steal his shirt, like the nutcase she is. Yeah, I'm going to go that...

Kids on the run with no source of income? You need to tie up all the loose ends! What happens when Pein has to go to school? What about Peeta's family? They would definitely miss him. It feels like you stopped halfway through the story.

Huh, well the ending wasn't really an ending. Kids

Interesting story, but I can't believe no one picked up on Katniss' abuse all those years. Are we supposed to assume she was raped? And since you did it three times in this chapter, I'll bring it up. It's could've, should've, and must've, NOT could of, should of, or must of. It's a contraction for should have, could have, and must have.

Interesting...
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"No one will miss me" I was waiting for a "No one needs me" "I do" like in catching fire, omg

Before I close the window and whisper "hell no" omg I'm dying laughing this is my reason for life

this fanfic was so good! you should totally make this into a sequel!

Hey i'm half Cherokee! Its hard to be a white Cherokee.

I'm so sad that this is over now. But very good job! I'm looking forward to reading your new Everlark stories!

Whoa. Just whoa.

Aww. I liked it.

This is a great story, but so many unanswered questions (like why isn't Cray coming after Prim). Please write a sequel.