very good story, I am quite fascinated, greetings, we read, bye!

You mentioned hidden jutsus, but the correct translation is not Hidenjustu but, Hijutsu (which is secret or hidden jutsu) as it would be:
mokuton hijutsu - jukai koutan: Wood Release Secret Technique: Nativity of a World of Trees ...
Hijutsu- Makyō Hyōshō ... Hidden Jutsu: Crystal Ice Mirrors
literally translated
just an observation ... greetings, I continue reading your story, very good so far by the way ...

I was liking this, despite the dumb Bleach references and InuYasha jutsus, but then you just had to give him the Rinnegan. Might as well make him the One Punch Man while you're at it. This is story is shite.

You didn't give him the Rinnegan though. You gave him the "The FanFiction Author Was Too Stupid To Research Literally Anything" ripoff version. YOU CAN'T DEACTIVATE THE RINNEGAN. YOU GET IT AND YOU LITERALLY ALWAYS HAVE IT FOREVER. IT CHANGES YOUR EYES. Naruto can't have blue eyes and activate/deactivate the fucking Rinnegan!

The Rinnegan can't just be turned off and on. It's always active. The eyes never change - that's the whole point of being the ultimate and original of them all! Why are you all like this?

The first word exists my weeb ass brain Bankai Senbonzakura Kageyoshi

Why would they continue with this farce and reveal that they’re aware that orochimaru is fake. It’s one thing to go along pretending to operate under false information and then ambush. It’s another thing not even pretend to do that and weaken yourself at the same time.

I just realized that this is that retarded fic that decided to make timing Mizuki overpowered for no conceivable reason lorewise, and decided to just shit out the fact that "Oh, Naruto has the Rinnegan, which actually is a thing that exists in Naruto and is already known to be a power up, but now even people Naruto beat the shit out of without any trouble in the original Manga need to be fucking Mid to High Jonin level! If you wanted to make the story not retarded, then you'd scrap the "making Mizuki overpowered" bullshit, and increasing the odds Naruto has to overcome in an actually reasonable way, much like Third Fang's Yet again with a little extra help, and Take Two Round Two did, for example, by making them have restrictions put in place that they actually need to plan around, and having to face incredibly high level enemies much earlier than he normally would. (Also this Naruto is much more than 10 times more powerful than beginning of series Naruto, so even with a curse seal, which I don't know if you even gave Mizuki a curse seal, Mizuki should still get beaned [also Orochimaru wouldn't care that much about Mizuki, and I'm fairly certain that Orochimaru and Mizuki collaborating was filler].)

Overall, you had decent ideas (I dropped it about 6-12 months back when I saw the Mizuki bullshit, so I can't say anything about the stuff further on), but the execution was so incredibly bad that I couldnt

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

I just wanna say you’ve done a good job. It’s not a masterpiece but a good story worth the read. Most people would write 10 chapters and get bored, but you’ve kept it going. And I salute you on that.

Why place the cursed seal just to kill him.

Nice epilog, kirabi!

Imagine when naruto finds out the human path is used to rip people’s soul out

The black rings are supposedly eye bags, due to Gaaras lack of sleep

The Rasengan is said to only be Jiraiya, Naruto, and Minato move. Why does Hinata get to learn it? Jiraiya was reluctant to teach naruto because he’s Minato’s son, but Hinata holds no affiliation with Namikaze.