Oh you have to update this fic! I like where it's going so far. I wanna know what happens next!

This is a really good ficcie, best I've read for a long time...I want more, please hurry up!

Come on Shae finish this. You can't let the lil blonde suffer like this, and I need some Squall x Zell action *grins*
Squell

Oh! I really hope you continue. This is an amazing fic! *sob*

poor zell i cant wait for the next chapter

Very good. Hope you continue

heya!

the chappi is fine the way it is. _

remember me from fd.n?

well fd is not working so im gonna read ur fic from here!

keep writing! its a great story! )

I thought this chapter was fine. I like how you use your words. And it makes sense that Zell would feel quilty for loving Squall while he was going out with his girlfriend. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm glad you decided to continue this _

Great start. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Squall can help Zell.