Nice disclaimer. And noice chapter.

I want a cookie

jajajajaja aparently the earl is mana so... yeah

When is the next chapter coming out?

Yay cookies!

I want virtual cookies!

This story is so beautiful. I really really love Mana, also the end of this chapter maked me smile. Please don't kill Mana and if Allen is going to become part of the Black Order, make Mna as an entertainer or something. Just don't kill mana. Please continue the story soon... :)

This really a great story i cant wait for more i hope updata soon (:

I loved this chapter is Alan gonna trust the earl and the others are they gonno stay as a family again?i want the earl to cry! PLEASE TELL MEEEEEEEE AND UPDATE SOON

Can't Wait Until The Next Chapter

Sometimes its confusing to who is talking. Use "allen said" or whatever so it isnt just random

My post-exams reward fanfiction was worth the sufferring and the waiting! In tandem with post-exam anime and that kind of thing... Anyway, some quick comments before I fall asleep are called for I believe:

There's not too much to say in brief, besides that it was an interesting concept. Your writing has improved a lot compared to the things ai last read, and there's a certain charm that this story has that's so... Intriguing? It's different from the things you usually do, at least in the later chapters. Characterization is wonderful as always, and I felt especially partial to Mana Walker, but then again, aren't we all?
I thin I can't write a proper review this late... Or early? But hopefullly you understand the main thing I was trying to say...
Ah, and I apologised for not Doing this sooner. I look forward to the continuation.

Yeah, about that wind thing you mention, where I live the wind reaches 60 mph on a windy day, so the internet just lied to you. This chapter was awesome, so awesome.

This chapter was kinda cute, with Allen and Mana spending so much time together :) Great chapter!

Oh my gosh, Mana, this was too good! I'm glad I didn't have to wait for more :)