Reviews for Beyond the Veil Volume Two: Challenges
EndlessStarlights chapter 11 . 12/3/2019
I don't like Cyclops as much as the next guy but damn it I'm starting to pity the guy, the Hulk really should have been gentle
UNLIMITED FOOD WORKS chapter 5 . 3/4/2017
totally didnt see that i thought it would be someone evil that got the drive not harry. good one smart too.
RaveDemon007 chapter 3 . 3/4/2017
I just noticed but Rachel called scott a dick and that she wants to strangle him that sounds like masturbation lol
Hadrian von Eveschatten chapter 30 . 8/4/2016
Apocalypse, though an A-class enemy to defeat, ultimately and unknowingly proved to be a diversion that allowed Zod's soul to possess Osborn.

A great book II for your Beyond the Veil series and I cannot wait to read Harry and co.'s continued journey in book III.
Hadrian von Eveschatten chapter 29 . 8/3/2016
Did you mean for this arc to be titled "Requiem" instead? That would fit what was done to Riddle's soul, whatever was left of it, and 'requim' isn't a word.

When Osborn gets captured this time, Harry and co. would do well to kill him. The same fate should await Essex. Letting The Goblin out on repeated rampages when he could be put down is just embarrassing for whoever is containing him, and letting a sinister geneticist breathing is just detrimental to global security.

Nice utilisation of M'gann's shapeshifting powers both here and in the Mysterio arc.

Wow Raven, you would doom the world just so you can be freed from Essex. You know, you could have just teamed up with Harry and killed that evilutionary geneticist. "An energy blast engulfed Mystique and turned her into stone as she had her hands placed upon the glowing pedestal." That's what you get for helping to free Apocalypse.
Hadrian von Eveschatten chapter 28 . 8/3/2016
The arrogance of someone can be measured by the number of times they refer to themselves as 'the greatest x who had ever lived' in a single breath, and for Riddle, his number is 8. Amazing.

Lois makes for a nice addition to the collective.

"Voldemort or rather what was left of his soul, was now confined to a racquet ball." A fitting end for glorified terrorist. Also a fitting end for Sirius's body. Seriously, his body was found in book I, talked about for a few chapters, then never mentioned again. So this is a good way to kill of that ill-conceived plot point once and for all.
Hadrian von Eveschatten chapter 27 . 8/2/2016
Always fun to see Harry taking a tight little teen.

Hi Rachel! It's so good to see you! Where have you been hiding her over the past 10 chapters?

You channeling through Deadpool and tasering a certain old coot is all of us sane people.
Hadrian von Eveschatten chapter 26 . 8/2/2016
Pym's first mistake was to think that his brainwaves were a sound foundation to base an AI on. Also, it didn't seem Pym even fucking bothered to put numerous failsafes into Ultron's programming.
Guest chapter 23 . 7/30/2016
"A newspaper was thrown down in front of his face that talked about the manhunt for Norman Osborn." Claim insanity out of this one Ozzy boy.

"My name is Milton Fine." You judged his character extremely well Gwen.

Kara can be such a troll.

"In some ways, she had been born again." The most cringe-worthy sentence in this book so far.

"The alien happily complied although it was hard to keep her wits about herself, she had a sudden urge to start the mating process." Please, don't stop on our account Kori.

Nice way of bringing the Kree into the story.
Hadrian von Eveschatten chapter 25 . 7/31/2016
I wouldn't have much of a problem with Ultron's plans if he only targeted the people who fit the disease profile.
Hadrian von Eveschatten chapter 23 . 7/31/2016
"A newspaper was thrown down in front of his face that talked about the manhunt for Norman Osborn." Claim insanity out of this one Ozzy boy.

"My name is Milton Fine." You judged his character extremely well Gwen.

Kara can be such a troll.

"In some ways, she had been born again." The most cringe-worthy sentence in this book so far.

"The alien happily complied although it was hard to keep her wits about herself, she had a sudden urge to start the mating process." Please, don't stop on our account Kori.

Nice way of bringing the Kree into the story.
Hadrian von Eveschatten chapter 24 . 7/31/2016
"Thor turned towards Harry, as did others, and there were a few people who watched him from the sidelines." There is no doubt whom the real leader is.

Well, that is kind of anticlimactic, even though Roan got whipped like a crippled bitch.

Kori makes for a lovely addition to the collective.
Hadrian von Eveschatten chapter 22 . 7/29/2016
It would be a real treat if Harry incorporated the Black sisters into his collective.

"Harry had a feeling that they were about to do something extremely unholy in a holy and sacred place and he had no real problems with that." My man.

Emma is 24 years old in chapter 50 of book I, yet here she is 28? Only a year has passed between then and now, so shouldn't she be 25? Regardless, the ice queen melted for Harry alright.

I wonder how long Shaw has to live.
Hadrian von Eveschatten chapter 21 . 7/29/2016
'Face it Tigress, I just hit the Jackpot.' Words that have never been spoken by MJ Watson in canon (as far as I know of, I'm not a rabid comic book reader), but wholly appropriate in that context. Welcome to the club MJ and Liz.

Having a piece of shit mutant for a father is no excuse for projecting your own self-loathing onto the mutant population at large Creed.

Harry should have the foresight of assigning Jennifer a bodyguard or convincing her to move into one of his properties until this whole FOH episode settles down.

The much teased Selene finally makes her debut. She and Har-Rell seems to have quite an history, even though he hasn't met her yet, meaning time travel is involved.
Hadrian von Eveschatten chapter 20 . 7/29/2016
Harry left Emma panting, which means that she will probably pounce on him the next time they are alone together.

The first fivesome in the series, nice. And what's better than a fivesome? Why, a sixsome with blonde quintuplets of course!

Just a pointer, why Harry is fucking a girl from behind, his balls would slap against her clit instead of her ass.

I think it would be more appropriate to use the word 'leader' instead of 'savior' to describe Harry. Sure it's fun to read 'the cult of Harry Potter' because it just refers to his ever growing collective, but I'm not down with reading a story featuring a cult honcho as the protagonist.
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