Chillingly good. Turn to the bottle or the person? Glad Alvin took the right choice here...

Really liked the hug at the end :3 Great job :3

Aw, how sweet! I'm starting to warm up to this pair, and I think the sensible part of the ToX fanbase is able to handle Alvin/Leia better than the game itself. You're one of them.

Hey nice one-shot! I really enjoyed reading it. The ending was my favorite part, such a nice 'Awwww' moment.

I'm so glad to see some Leia/Alvin popping up, although they definitely seem like a delicate pair to write about, with the whole " getting shot incident". In my opinion it takes some talent to tip toe around that in a plausible way, which I thought you did really well. :) Thanks for the read!

I LOVE this! I'm so glad Alvin/Leia stuff is up right now, I just beat the game and wrote something too but didn't post it up.. Actually mine kind of ended the same way as yours, I'm getting goosebumps! haha. And ugh I'm so sad because I chose Jude's route and don't really know much about Alvin and his mother.. And this sounds like a sub event that I didn't do either.. I love how you write Alvin, I think his personality really devolved after that scene (and also Leia's too..) This was so sad but also really sweet. And I liked Leia's outbursts too about the nightmares. Ah, just read the last few paragraphs again, soo sweet. Good luck Alvin...!

Almost finished the game and i'm totaly unashamed to ay that there were two OTP : JudexMilla and AlviinxLeia. Somehow they are just so good with each other and after their ''incident'' in Hamil, it appears so obvious that there were some thing left unsaid about them at the end.

So i'm reaaaaaly delighted to see that you've written oneshot about them ! I admit that this one is my favorite : so sweet and emotional ! Leia is so kind and comforting Alvin the way she did almost (no in fact it did) made me cried ! (-hug Alvin to comfort him too-)

Really good !

Thank you, no really, thank you. You brought them to the next level and gosh these feels. Even my heart was aching of all the crisis in alvins heart and me so proud of leia standing all tough in front of him.. Please write more, i am very fond of your writing and you stay so very in character, i'm all asdfghjkl in my feelz, thanks again! XD

My heart. The feels. So many.

Really though, you did an awesome job with this one-shot! I feel like the build up to Alvin finally exploding on Leia was very believable (particularly considering the events that have preceded this encounter) and feel that Leia's response was both justified and in character. Also, I love the large amount of Alvin's inner dilemma that we get to see here; it really makes his desire for Leia's acceptance and 'warmth' all the more poignant.

Also, I love the whole premise of this thing, what with Alvin choosing between turning to the bottle, turning to the silence, or turning to another person. Again, you've done an amazing and nuanced job at capturing his dilemma without beating the reader over the head with it.

And yes, being a huge lover of this couple, I am so pleased with that tiny bit of fluff we got at the end. It was so cute!

So in conclusion, you did a great job not only handling the individual characters, but also handling the interactions between the two of them. Thank you so much for writing for the Alvin x Leia shippers out there! Speaking as one of them, I am so happy to see it!

Now if you'll excuse me, I'll just be standing over here with my feels, hoping that someday soon you'll post another story with this couple because you're far to talented at writing for these two for this to be a one time deal!