Hola! Disfruté tu fic porque amó el rivamika

Sorry if that sounded like a complaint or a criticism. I didnt intend for it to sound like it was and only noticed afterwards that that may be what it sounds like. I'm honestly just curious about what kinds of birds they have there.

Love your birds. The only kind of birds we have that stick around in the winter are crows and they don't sing very good.

Yasssss update!

Great story, is very interesting and the characters fit perfectly with their personalities

Any story is in very good shape. Which doesn't surpise me because I read a few good books, with simple hand writing, and detail that require amazing quotes, character development, point of views, steamy, dary, thrilling, actionable, and potential parts within in each chapter. Sometimes, I see when people start off writing fanfics that doesn't sound exactly like who they are in real life. Though I can't complain, we humans try to be significant in our stories when we want to be. Apparently, your handwriting recognition sounds beautifully in detail. Not only grammar problems are included, your story was extremely well organized. I doubt nothing for you or anybody to disrespect the way you come up with your stories. In all my life I can't judge any fanfic writer besides the certain types on wattpad, because it doesn't bring much of my enthusiasm. Keep hanging on and never stop doing what you've been doing. Good luck.

This is so beautiful that I cried. This is so wonderfully written, it's as if I could feel their emotions ;0;

awwwww! that was so beautiful! bravo!

Mm this was totally adorable! :3

Sinna! Rose and Maria! Oh heavens! You have gave me so much joy.
My fangirling heart is pleased beyond words.

Armin, Mikasa and Eren are my favorite family, they being together makes me happy.

This was a sweet Shiganshina Trio's moment.

But... But... She is just stuborn Levi, she needs you, run after her.

I like it, a lot.

Thanks

F... So intense, so much sexual tension, so good. This chapter was amazing!

Same time, same place! Yes! Nice begining
:)

You've shown me once more why I love reading fanfics. written by writers whose native language is not English. There is something in your style that is so distinctly different from native English writers' and it is so lyrical and poetic. Each sentence, each word - none are wasted. The way you use metaphors and your syntax - my gods, this story is relatively short but it took me a while to finish just because I couldn't help but read your words over and over again. I didn't feel like I was reading text, but watching a scenery unfold before my eyes. Somehow, you have placed a visual imagery in each action and thought and it's beautiful. I adore this writing style but what I love even more is how the tone matches the scenery you have set. When I read this, I felt the quietness in the air... sometimes buzzing with energy and other times, contemplative. And for some reason, I saw a soft gray, too. How you balance the tone and setting of the story are the kinds of things I seek in other people's writing (heck, even films, games, etc.) When a writer is able to project their story's atmosphere upon the audience, you know - YOUKNOW, this right here, is talent. Never stop writing.

Your characterization of Mikasa and Levi were en pointe! This is not the 'action' type of story but more of.. introspection through seemingly small actions. And you succeeded. The build-up and the animosity were all believable and realistic of these two's type of character. Levi's potty-mouth and reactions (that I thought I would never fathom on his person) - you handled it all with such ease and poise. Usually I'm skeptical of romance happening in stories that are less than 10 chapters but you made it conceivable. I think it helps that this story's focus wasn't on the romance per se but on two individual's development and how they find that in each other.

There are two things that stuck out to me in this chapter though - minor critique. Last sentence, I believe you meant 'bury' rather than 'burry.' And at the part where you had Mikasa 'bawl' at him in anger, 'bawl' should not be used here as it's really a synonymous term for crying and I believe that's not the action you intended for Mikasa.

There, that's it. Now excuse me as I go on to lurk through the rest of your stories. I hope your dabbling in the SnK fandom will extend beyond this because really, writing like yours is hard to come by. (Despite the occasional slip-up in word choices or spelling, true skills can shine through regardless.)