Excellent story! I'd love to see it continued.

This is such an amazing story, I've reread it several times and still I can't get enough. The way you've taken each character, their personality, their voices, its all so much, so good. You're such a talented writer I'm in awe.

I hope that you'll be continuing this. It's easily become one of my favourites.

Jarvis is a bae

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I cant believe it. I LOVE IT. Noy like what I am used to read. But it is perfect as it is.

Never watch thé movie with Rhodes so...
.. I really dont kniw what I could say. I love it but it is been more than à year since thé ladt update. I would love to know what Will happen next but I know it is difficult to write sometimes... but if you cjoose to abandon permanently say it please. It would bé à shame but Well it is your story..

I like how they got bored and started improvising

This was heartwarming to read, a good reconciliation scene

Fury was great just great

it's nice to see Tony ans Rhodey acting like this; it reminded me a little of Armoured Adventures

I really liked the way you showed them interacting and bouncing off each other

Nice job showing the conflict here; I particularly liked how you showed Fury and Steve

I liked the way they put on a how, especially 'Iron Man's' line on protecting Tony from himself

You dis a great job showing emotional impact that an incident like that could cause

In the middle of such interactions and thoughts, Stve is still clueless

Your show of Stane's thoughts align pretty well with what we saw of him