I love the last two paragraphs in you're story (well, paragraph & sentence). Totally made my day XD

This is so good, and I agree with the whole episode 7. Also, not wanting to be pushy, but could you please continue this! It is really really good.

well ... maybe haru should leave with rin ...
than together will be always

OH MA GAWD. SO MANY FEELS ;.;

it was a really nice chapter I liked how it all seemed so natural but men Rin is so so so nicely selfish lol ) who wouldn't have fallen for that ) I like how you kept them on character. thank you for writing!

This story would have made me feel so satisfied after I watched that episode. It's funny how almost the whole fandom, no matter how much they liked Rin, thought that Rin did a dick move towards Haru. Great job! :)

*points and flails arms in spaz like motions* THIS MY DEAR PEOPLE IS HOW IT'S DONE! This is how it SHOULD have been *_* favved and following you, by the gods this was hot and awesome...and nyaaa...thank you for this :)

KAKOIIII!
LOVE IT
RIN X HARU
/w/

ASDFGHJKL. this was probably my favorite fanfictions ever. The details..

PERFECT

PERFECT.

I loved everything about this A ... LOVED

Woah I really loved the ending. This fanfiction struck me with a million feels. Thanks for writing this. ; w ;

I read this story about three times before reviewing it and I have to say that I absolutely adore what you have written here! Excellent characterization and the build up in the story is simply perfect. Both Haruka and Rin's personalities are SPOT ON and I can actually imagine this moment happening between the two of them.

The last episode had truly gave me feels and this really made me feel better, so I thank you for your contribution to the Free! Fandom for this lovely piece of fanfiction. .

Awesome job! 8D

Holy shit , the feels. That last episode pissed me off ! And this story reminds me of why Haruka still deals with Rin's bullshit.
Amazing job, I feel like the paragraphs where Haruka is telling Rin off is realistic. Haruka only wants to be in the comfort of something that has been there all his life, and that something is water. But Rin took away that joy. :(
Again, splendid job! :)

Thank you for saying it, that episode pissed me off more than you could ever believe. XD It's been bugging me and this made me feel better XD

Hah...hahah...my body can't decided whether to be turned on or broken emotionally. This was all sorts of painful. But then bam smut...nngh...that episode...man...I can't with it. Thanks for tryin to sooth the wounds, this helped. Hurt at first but helped none the less.

ahahaha, love it! awesome job, just wow.