I am looking forward to chapter 14 and I hope Princess Celestria tells Naruto that she contains Nightmare Moons sister Princess Molestia.

So... He wakes up a horse and he's just fine with that? Seriously I hoped this would be a Naruto/mlp fic, that might be interesting... But nope. Just a MLP fic with a horse named Naruto.

I am looking toward to chapter 14 and I hope Naruto gains his human memories.

I can imagine the scream he had

I really liked how the story is going so far and I can't wait for the next chapter to be really and I like how you made it to where naruto had lost his memory and how he and Luna fall in love with each other and how he and nightmare Moon is starting to fall in love to and is also starting a family.

Loved the way you described Nightmare's dream. Loved the Fluttercord in this too. You did drag the dream on a little to far but that's ok it happens. Blue Bark is a cute name for a puppy. I hope you make there life with crystal worth it. She's very sweet and energetic like naruto. I just feel bad for both Nightmare and Naruto when she becomes a teenager XD I loved the description you gave Twilights date. Hahaha.

Keep up the good work!

Your Friend,

~ The Mighty Ninyn

Nope. This fanfic is officially nothing more than Projected-Fantasizing and Gary Stu-ism. Judging by the pacing and content of these 3 chapters, it is highly unlikely of there being anything redeeming in this story. I'm sorry, but I refuse to read any more of this Fantasy-Pandering drivel. Good luck, and I sincerely hope you get better at writing.

... it got worse... one more chapter, and if it doesn't improve I'm done.

Okay... 1 instance of love-at-first-sight in a story is lazy writing, 2 instances is bad writing, and this? This is nothing short of utter bullshit. I will keep reading out of hope that the rest of the story is better than the forced romance in this first chapter.

just so you know equestria is not the name of the planet its just one kingdom just like the griffon kingdom and the minotuar kingdom and the demand dog clan's and the changeling hivelands. the name of the planet is equess

Andrew2013, just so you know, I love this story. There's only two things I find nitpicky. First of all, why doesn't naruto use any of his justus like rasegan and shadow clone. Also, if this is set in season 3 when discord was released, why aren't shining armor and cadence married yet. I hope you can somehow explain or fix this because other than that, you're doing an amazing job.

All the fluff and cuteness and the blushing. I just simply love this chapter. Good woe keep it up. I'll read ya later-BFBL

I swear if that's sasuke you will lose me. other than that I am loving this story.

It's a decent fic but 1 thing i don't like about it is how you portray Naruto. He doesn't know how to control his anger that is more worse than the canon Naruto. Also the angsty of both Naruto and Nightmare/Luna, its no longer realistic.

It's okay to make a good drama fic but please you should know when to use it in a scene or situation.

Damn making us wait so long for this chapter. But allais you had…certain complication with a little thing called life. But this is such a good chapter I don't know we're to begin and to end so it's such a gret chapter and ill await chapter 13
Ill read ya later-BFBL