Poor Edward to find out that your wife was cheating on you with your best man . No wonder , he isn’t falling for Bella because looking at her reminds him of Sara . And also knowing that Bella was a cheater herself and was hoping her lover Riley would leave his wife for her while Edward wife was probably going to leave him for Jacob Black . Don’t date a cheater Edward she’ll cheat on you too . Bella is a reminder of Sara’s infidelity for Edward . She looks like her and was a cheater like her .

Great so she had no problem sleeping with her married partner? . He died but she was the mistress so she can’t mourn wouldn’t want the rest of her colleagues to know she had no Moral. I hate these kind of women the ones who know someone is married but don’t care . Bella knew Riley was married yet had no problem sleeping with him and his poor grieving wife . Love the story but this Bella just made me sick I hate cheaters worst I hate cheaters who don’t care that they are hurting the wife sitting at home . It says a lot about Bella and Riley’s character him for cheating on his family and Bella being the kind of woman who open her legs for married men without caring who it hurts .

Oh, I remember when you did this a few years ago. I don’t like reading TWCS on my iPad as it won't hold the font when you turn the page, which is terribly frustrating. I’m not on Wattpad, not even ever looked at it. I’ve read a few things on FictionPad but, that has an issue with font staying on the iPad as well. Cranky sites, the lot of them. This one included for their stupid ToS rules and more importantly, the lack of coming down on plagiarism. I digress.

Awww, that was nice of you to do. You’ve got a kind heart.

Yay, the cat is okay and going with them to the Bayou. Whew! I was worried about the cat more than the people when they were in peril, lol. I bet some of your readers were cranky that Bella and Edward never got together in this. I’m not, as it seems to be progressing very well. Friendship first for these two seems to be the best route. They’ve both been very hurt in the last. Trust issues are bound to be there for both. Great ending to a fun to read tale. Looking forward to part two tomorrow. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here. ~Christy

That was extremely kind of Bella to do for Rodriguez. I also liked that she shared with him the reason she left LAPD. He was saddened by it. I’m happy he’ll be getting promoted for it, as that’s a great thing. Gerandy is made to suffer a very long time this way. I hope the gang is right and that Michael and the others make sure to step in, each time he gets close to finding a way around his angel inflicted inprisonment (sp?).

I laughed during the whole chapter. I don’t think you meant for it to be funny, as I think you were going for drama there and making the reader worry. I was however, shaking my head through it. That this idiot actually thinks he’s got a chance at any of them, is a joke. Worry was the furthest thing in my head.

Okay, that chapter was unbelievable and not in the good way. With all of their powers, we’re expected to believe that he’s just able to swoop in that way? No, not buying it.

What about Bella's cat? Who’s going to watch her if she has no friends or family? Edward made no mention of a cat coming along for the plane ride either. Now I’m worried about the cat. Booooo. Interesting that Edward suddenly got wealthier. He mentioned his family were of upper middle class, now it seems they are of upper class. What did I miss?

Nope, didn’t like that chapter at all. Now, when they catch this guy, none of her ex bullpen assholes will know she and her psychic's brought the perp down. Neither will anyone at the FBI, as hell be on leave. I wanted her to stick it to all the assholes in the department, by being blue to gloat.

It’s good that Bella will have Edward, Sam, Lauren and Angela to continue working with. However, I find it very odd that the FBI would pull Edward off this case, when they sent him in in the first place. That part makes no sense. Plus, it really sucks that her whole department has made fun of her and she’s survived it before. For her to be removed from the case, as a result of their pettiness is just sad.

Found him, lured him and he still got away. Then they did the binding spell, which I am guessing is made to hold him where he is, so they can get to him this time. I don’t like that the whole family is being held in a room with two police that most likely will not do as Bella asked. Plus, if this Babalú-Ayé can reach into a room without having to enter it, what’s stopping him from doing exactly what Sam has just done to find him? He can kill the man without even leaving the comfort of his couch.

Ah, so I was right. The sicko was out for vengeance against Edward and the others. Blinded by it too.

I hope Officer Rodriguez is okay. He drank from the coffee pot that Bella noted she did not make. If it was already made for her, it may have been made to poison her.

So, the scene was designed by Samantha to protect the five of them once they entered or, the killer used her to take their powers one by one so that s/he can use them? Since Edward couldn’t hear anything that was going through Angela’s head, nor Lauren’s, it makes sense that the powers were either taken or protected.