Hi, this is a really good story. Was this the last chapter or is it not finnished yet? It's such a big cliffnhanger and I'd love to know what happens in the end.

Where's tthe ending there should be an ending for this

I know you haven't updated this story in a while but I absolutely adore it!

Another excellent chapter! Keep up the great work!

This is one awesome story but I'm not satisfied with the chapter's contents. It gets shorter and shorter every updates. I know I shouldn't complain but this has so much potential. President ORB you have the signature of using cliffhanger in this story but it feels like your just using it as an excuse now. (I meant that the way you use cliffhanger isn't suitable for the chapter anymore.) Your using it too much that the effect backfires. Please watch closely on that part, I'm letting you know from a readers perspective.
In my point of view, it's like you wanted to say this sentence; "Jack went to see Hiccup to say his good bye because he's guilty about what happened to him." but construct hundreds of words so it would at least satisfy the readers' hunger for words. You have the will of updating whenever you want and readers has nothing to say to that but if you want be fair then at least put more scene information about the whole story and not just focus on one progress.
This is just a suggestion and you will probbly see this as a mean one but I want to be honest. I didn't risk my account because I know there are stupid people who has lots of time and send me bad feedbacks about this.
My main point is just that you could do better than those followin chapters that you updated after the Hiccup's accident. I like this story so much and I hate to see that it's been given unequal thought and feelings every chapter.

This is one big awesome story but I'm getting shorter and shorter scenes every chapter, I'm not satisfied at all. :( I know I shouldn't complain but the update takes so much time that I have to remember what the story was about. Not to mention after the long wait it only contains one scene. President ORB, you have the signature of leaving cliffhangers on this story of yours but if you use it to much the effect backfires so I suggest to limit it next time

OH FUCK NO ASSHOLE JACK YOU GONNA GO BACK TO THAT ROOM AND JUST GIVE HIM A CHANCE GODDAMNIT DONT YOU TURN AWAY FROM THIS

AHH! Please update soon, I can't wait to read next chapter :)

Please update soon, I really like this :D

This story is good can u Update soon

This is absolutely awesome! I just LOVE it! I can't hate a single thing about it. Please update more!

So can't wait to read more!

LOL! There are those stubbornness issues. I'm so flippin excited to see another chapter so soon too! Than you so much! I really do hope he gets to talk to Jack soon. Looks like it might be hard with Warden Astrid on the job though. Heh. Can't wait for the next chapter! ...Which isn't to say I /won't/ wait... Because I will. As long as I need to. :3

And then Jack ends up finding a way to sneak into Hiccup's room... Cause he's Jack... XD

Ahhhh puppy visit ! Does hiccup miss Jack at all ?