Reviews for Misplaced
EclipStorm chapter 102 . 7/13
OOOOKAY! I just finished reading this whole story and DAMN it hit me right in the feels during the epilogue. Great story, and the best Naruto fanfiction that I've ever read so far. The Codex entries were also amazing and fun to read as well.
EclipStorm chapter 5 . 7/13
I'm legit crying because this story is so emotional with all of the flashbacks.
xLoneWolf001x chapter 1 . 7/7
wasplot holes**
xLoneWolf001x chapter 1 . 7/7
wasplot holes**
xLoneWolf001x chapter 9 . 7/7
Okayyy, I'm not sure if I want to honestly keep reading this. All you're doing is changing tiny details from the actual game itself, which honestly doesn't bother me, but it's how youre portraying Naruto. You're making him exactly like commander Sheppard which is literally betraying the core of who Naruto is. Then the scene with the council. Naruto could have proved the memory transfer but he didn't? nah, makes zero sense. I get your trying to follow the story, which I still love to this day, but at the same time some of the things you're doing feel incrediblely forced and like you didn't want to write anything that deviates to far from Canon. I'll give is two more chapters and if I'm not impressed, Adios. I do want to state your writing is excellent and I'm not trying to force you to move a certain way, its just the obvious plot that we're created with the world you made that make me so hesitant to keep reading.
Bruhther chapter 10 . 7/1
Absolutely love the Bijuu peanut gallery
588963-B chapter 102 . 6/11
Damn, just damn.

I've read all 102 chapters and I have to say that this is a good story.

Although I hate how that one girl died by breaking her neck, it's just compared to the other characters who died it was just so lackluster, I have a feeling that if she died in like a last stand sorta thing like javik I would be able to move past it but damnit it's just there in my head.

Sorry enough ranting, I really did like this story.
The Jabberwock of OZ chapter 87 . 5/4
You know when I played ME3; I thought for sure something like this would have happened.
I did not think Rannoch would be Space Australia, but I thought that a few of the Quarian Resistance would have had a presence on the homeworld.
It would be a logistic nightmare to have killed every single Quarian that wanted to protect the Geth.
Good stuff.
World Maker 777 chapter 32 . 4/19
I know you weren’t trying to make Naruto super, crazy over-powered and stuff: but I would’ve thought that he would’ve learned at least a few of Jiraiya’s jutsu.
(Rasenga & Summoning jutsu, not with standing.)
Arch-Angel-Writer chapter 102 . 4/18
from start to finish this is an amazing story. honestly it seemed never ending. I stop on the reaper invasion of earth. Then someone told me the story was finished. The absolute best Naruto Mass Effect crossover there is. congratulations and good job.
World Maker 777 chapter 29 . 4/16
OK I’m calling it now, chapter 29, I’m calling it. The Prothians were the ones to help humans develop chakra.
Having said that, I have a genuine question: why isn’t Naruto busting out any serious power? I mean, there’s only so many reasons you can use for why Naruto isn’t destroying entire platoons of Geth before readers start to smell some bull.
World Maker 777 chapter 24 . 4/10
Have ash awaken the Myageko (spelling?)!
Guest chapter 102 . 3/22
Hey I just wanted to say I loved this story such and amazing way to blend the game series with the naruto series this was one of the best fanfic I’ve ever read
FriggleBerry chapter 6 . 3/8
Honestly I steer well clear of anything HP and naruto this is the first if not one of like maybe 5 stories naruto related I’ve ever read but it’s pretty good kinda expected naruto to just steamroll everything but so far it’s slower paced and fucking good
World Maker 777 chapter 12 . 3/3
Curious about when Naruto will hit full power and drop tailed-beast balls/bombs on the reapers.
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