Reviews for The First of Me
Bree chapter 1 . 5/9
This is literally the best thing ever. Your writing is incredible, and you managed to capture the characters beautifully. And the plot, it sucked me in from start to finish. I absolutely adore this story, and I hope you know just how talented you are.
Hades Lord of the Dead chapter 1 . 4/19
Gorgeous fic!
gaylelbf chapter 1 . 7/30/2018
Wonderfully well written!
Bogorm123 chapter 1 . 3/11/2018
This is absolutely amazing! The way you write both of them and their friendship is fantastic! It is different from a lot of other stories like this one and that is what makes it so great! Great writing and great plot! Nice job dude!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2017
Hello! This was so nice! Are you going to post the rest of this arc, pretty please! I love ur writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2017
Will you make a separate chapter where Merlin tells t Arthur that Uther, with a straight face, said that Merlin was a trusted ally in the fight against magic,
Rookblonkorules chapter 1 . 6/26/2016
That was awesome! I loved the way Arthur pieced everything together.
Dina95 chapter 1 . 2/12/2016
"As human beings. our greatest fears reside in the unknown and in the prospect of being forsaken, forgotten, left behind, or hated by those we love..." The nature of human fears is wonderfully phrased here. I admire your way with words. Merlin's speech was one of my favorite, when it comes to magic reveal fics.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2015
This was the most PREFECT reveal fic ever. This is exactly what I've been looking for. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
Turmanarmo chapter 1 . 9/2/2015
This was beautiful and I love how you had Arthur work through his issues for one part of the reveal but still have some issues once he had the magic reveal. Seeing Merlin's feelings as he struggled to go through this and deal with his worry about Arthur hating/abandoning him was amazing. Thanks for doing this and good luck with future endeavors.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
This is a really powerful and touching fic. Arthur might be a little OOC, though I think it is for the best for the circumstances of this story. I like your Arthur much better than Canon anyway. He's sensible and not ignorant and actually being a good friend to Merlin. Merlin shines in this fic too. Being proud of who he is and actually making the decision of letting Arthur know, it speaks of such depths of emotional courage. The only problem I have with this fic is that the dialogue feels a little forced and unnatural; I have some trouble actually visualizing the characters saying them. But other than that, great work! I enjoyed reading it :)
FFFG chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
Well, that was certainly different. I have to admit I am impressed that Arthur was capable of deducing Merlin's secrets on his own. I honestly think I find this version of the reveal more likely than in "Only a Friend". This one had Arthur figuring things out on his own, in his own time, and confronting Merlin on his own. I think this is a much more likely scenario and I really enjoyed both the disbelief and acceptance he displayed. Thank you for the read! KTN
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2015
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christinemarie13 chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
Merlin's speech was beautiful and powerful. I tend to like fics where Arthur finally opens his eyes and realizes what's going on around him. Hard to believe he'd not realize something in all those years.
Obscured Angel chapter 1 . 1/19/2015
Thanks for writing and posting, it's appreciated.
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