| Reviews for MASS EFFECT Dosseir: Ahsoka Tano |
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  Guest chapter 8 . 5/10 Ahsoka/Liara T'Soni romance |
 patrickharris98 chapter 8 . 5/9 Can you please finish your story star wars the clone wars unleashed I really like that story |
| KaoruUzu chapter 8 . 5/9 Lol! NOW I am really curious what you will eventually come up with! May the force be with you. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/29 If your going to rewrite then make sure if a ahsoka x shepard story please. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/23 lol. |
| KaoruUzu chapter 7 . 3/21 I'm curious to see what you will bring us then |
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/21 Ok will do |
| CT7567Rules chapter 7 . 3/21 Just make sure you don't have it so Rex, Jesse and Echo remain loyal to the Empire. Clones like them shouldn't follow the orders of Sidious. |
| Jebest4781 chapter 7 . 3/21 let us know when the reboot comes up please |
| BraveSeeker3 chapter 2 . 1/9/2018 *frowns* Oh joy, the Council. Fun. Note the sarcasm. |
| BraveSeeker3 chapter 1 . 1/9/2018 You do realize Rex and Fives removed their chips? And I'm pretty sure Echo's was removed by the Techno Union. Ah well. |
| oserratos1 chapter 6 . 1/6/2018 pls continue the story |
| CT7567Rules chapter 1 . 7/14/2017 can you do a remake of this story. but instead of mass effect, do gears of war. if you do please don't have Rex, Fives and Echo loyal to the empire. |
| Revliledpembroke chapter 1 . 10/25/2016 GARRUS RAHH! You know that takes away from the scene, right? Granted, we all know that Garrus survives that part, but having a more or less stock "sound effect" really hurts every scene that effect is in. You should use it sparingly, or, better yet, absolutely never. There are literally hundreds, no, thousands of ways to say that someone was upset at the situation. I would be much more intrigued if I read something like "And Ahsoka was filled with righteous anger and smote the gunship down." You can get a real feeling for what's happening in that scene. Using the same stupid sound effect every time doesn't. Are they praying to an Egyptian god and the extra h is meant to be some sort of accent (Raaaaaah)? How upset are they? I imagine plenty, but using RAAAH for a little upset and RAAAAAAAAAAAAAH for very upset is unforgivably lazy. I may have mentioned something like this before, and you told me "lol, it's just my style." No, it isn't. Style is what makes a piece unique, not bland and boring as fuck. Honestly, RAAAH? What, are your characters playing the falcon headed Egyptian god in Smite and they used his ult? |
| DarkDust27 chapter 6 . 2/22/2016 I would say Shepard/Ahsoka as the pairing tk go with but your planing on him being with Tali... and I'd say Kaidan/Ahsoka but Ashley is alive so that means Kaidan died in ME1. So the choice is either Joker/Ahsoka or Jack/Ahsoka I prefer Joker! ;3 |
