It's beautiful! Odd but beautiful

And an amazing ending, sweet and happy.

I loved this fic, thank you for being so awesome as to share this fic with us. XD

It is a wonderful read and definitely one to remember.

Oh god.

This is so broken and beautiful and sad. Almost had me crying my eyes out with how Cloud is and his past.

aw! SO CUTE! I think this is just the break Cloud deserves! aw~ I wonder though...did he actually die, and that's his heaven? since he forgot his 'previous life'...

I don't think I can possibly express in words how much I love this piece. I've read it over and over, trying to think of something to say, but the words won't come. I just love it.

The first chapter... so incredibly powerful, and even more so when I read it aloud to myself, like some performance piece, I see Cloud sitting beside Zack, who doesn't really exist enough to say anything back. But it speaks for him in a way, even though Cloud's voice is the one that's there. Words and thoughts flow together and it's so unbelievably coherent without ever being obvious. I adore the repitition, the way words and phrases come back to haunt Cloud just as much as dreams and memories.

And the second chapter... made me cry. I honestly cried, and they were those wonderful tears that come out of pure emotion and the intensity of the hazy, golden contrast to the red of the previous chapter. Logically, it could be a dream, or it could be some form of salvation, but in reading it I learned not to really care, and thank you, thank you for the happy ending because there really are never enough.

Please forgive me for gushing, and for genereal incoherence. I know you said on your profile to ignore works that were this old, but I can't possibly see why you would want to discredit this... this wonderful thing. I love it.

i love chapter one it just sorta dug into me. :) thanks

Sqee, cute and fluffy especially when it's contrasted with the first chapter.

Absolutely lovely. You've really shown Cloud's conflicting emotions, and contrasted the darker first chapter beautifully with the lighter second chapter.

ego-masturbation...now that's a word I have got to try and use in everyday conversation...

Wow - so much contrast in just two chapters is mind boggling. I'll admit I'm the kind of gal who'll eat angst for breakfast, and to whom the idea of things going right doesn't even exist... So, reading this chapter and feeling the old 'aww' signals going off in my brain was certainly different. And not too unpleasant either. In fact, I think I thoroughly enjoyed myself.

[Shakes head] Extended metaphors and similes probably shouldn't be employed by someone with as low an IQ as I have... Ahem! *Anyway*, I just wanted to express my appreciation of the *excellent* writing, the wonderful pace, and the general 'feel-good-factor' this fic has.

It's gorgeous. I would propose marriage, but I'm too young (and poor, so I can't afford a ring).

[Blink, blink] A friend recommended this to me (in order to get me hooked on yet another new fandom). And, well, I have to say, she picked the bait well.

That was spectacularly written - the constant flow of his thoughts and feelings, and the going back to think over something again, and the general feel of the whole thing - it conveyed just how lost he is, how important it is to know *who* you are, and how strange it is when you're not really sure. Beautiful.

Hmm, you know I hardly ever write reviews. They just take too long to say things that have already been said by other people...and it makes no sense how I think I know this because I never read other people's reviews anyway. o_O; Either way, I felt compelled to review this because I love this story and I adore the writing style! Yes, especially the writing style. _ ZackxCloud is one of my favorite pairings, and it's so much harder to find good fics with them now that the lemons are gone. P Anyways, I truly do love how you wrote this, and I think you did a great job keeping the characters to what I guess could be considered in-game personalities. D The descriptions were awesome~! Thanks for writing this and making not going to sleep worth it. _

Ah so sad! *points accusingly* You made me cry! ...Well done! :D
This is one of my favourites, which says a lot because Sephiroth isn't even in it that much. O_o
Anyway, this is such a beautiful piece, how could I not fall in love with it? _
Thank you!
~ Silver Catalyst

Aw, so cute! This was so sweet. Please write more soon!
~firedraygon97

Wow. I am awestruck. You truly, truly, truly have an incredible amount of talent. The dialogue, imagery, and everything in general was beautiful. I wish I could write that well...;_;

*PURR* was just re-reading this. and dear god you got some images rolling woman.