Reviews for Escape
whiteDevilxyt chapter 6 . 13h
pretty good i underestimated you but how will the next chapoter go hehe
whiteDevilxyt chapter 5 . 14h
thats what they all say
whiteDevilxyt chapter 2 . 8/6
HINAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATA NO NO I KNEW THIS WAS GOING TO HAPPEN BASTARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRD!
Gamma-X chapter 21 . 4/19/2019
Well... You literally killed all my motivation to even read this fic... I might as well quit now... I never understood why you should hide things like these when it only hurts you. Sure, it'll bring others who are too weak into it with them, but with strong people like Jiraiya or Kakashi, there is literally no reason NOT to tell them. They could insta-fix this. But this is just fucking ridiculous. Downright retarded.
Gamma-X chapter 14 . 4/19/2019
I am willing to bet someone heard them and that Jiraiya, or at the very least, Kakashi, was watching them and possibly taking pictures. XD
makarina chapter 1 . 8/26/2018
kakashi ship it sasuke ship it lol
Tsuisekiuchia chapter 11 . 1/17/2018
Alright that was a very interesting chapter and I bet it only gets better from here and in a way I do think Hiashi (Damn my 13 year old Ass not knowing how to spell) did redeem himself but not in the way he could have. To:9tailedfox2
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Tsuisekiuchia chapter 9 . 1/17/2018
I have watched a bit of Kora it's ok but The Last AirBender was and still is better btw awesome job your doing on this thanks for Sharing this with us fellow fans To:NineTailedFox2 (Hope I got that right lmao) From:(your fan) Tsuisekiuchia
lucasrosa94 chapter 1 . 7/31/2017
conserte a ortografia.
Amon Kashino chapter 2 . 12/6/2016
Love Hanabi/Naruto but I can't read this the format is killing my eyes and taking the joy out of the story for me it may be a good story idk cause I can't read it sorry
xNaruHina chapter 14 . 11/15/2016
Well now that you have done the lemon you can't just back out of the intimacy between them now. You have to stick with what you have written ~
VoltActionSniper chapter 12 . 9/3/2016
Man. I can't take any of this seriously because of the characters age. Just lame dude. So hard to get into an otherwise well written story because you've set the suspension of belief so high. I'll stop reading here. Sorry friendo just too much eight year old shit going on
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 7 . 4/24/2016
I am very confused... I thought Hanabi already knew? YOu're making skim back and forth
draco7347 chapter 26 . 1/24/2016
noooooooooo
Geroar chapter 8 . 3/8/2015
Kawamari is supposed to be kawarimi and it is sasuke not saskue
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