Reviews for Like a Fish Out of Water |
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cfccfc chapter 1 . 2/15/2017 Alas, I've reached the end of your completed stories. How sad. You are a truly gifted writer. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us. Wish you were still writing. |
grea8read chapter 1 . 10/15/2013 This was great! I love how Dean gets lost in his head with the fish, deer, etc. Great stuff. |
mb64 chapter 1 . 8/27/2013 This is very enjoyable! :) |
JenF chapter 1 . 8/27/2013 Oh my. This story has so much to love. I'm a sucker for hurt!Dean and his confusion over the plurals of the English language made me smile (and think!). I enjoy reading stories in the present tense - I think it just gives a sense of the here and now more than past tense but it's often hard to pull off. You've done it perfectly with this story and I really enjoyed it. Thank you. |
emebalia chapter 1 . 8/27/2013 Love Dean's stream of thoughts. But he's not that much out of it that he doesn't notice Sam's hypothermia. |
missingmikey chapter 1 . 8/27/2013 Really enjoyed this! |
the ticking clock chapter 1 . 8/27/2013 Adorable and beautifully done. Loved Dean's drowsiness and silly talk. :) |
Sharlot chapter 1 . 8/27/2013 D'awwww! A dose of delicious loopy-hypothermic!Dean and protective!caring!Sam. My favorite! I couldn't ask for more 'n that! Absolutely adored the hell out of this! Thanks! |
alena chapter 1 . 8/26/2013 What a lovely story! You have deftly conjured up Dean's predicament in the perils and aftermath of hypothermia- Dean's struggles with the English language are a hoot and the brotherly interactions are spot on! Thank you! |
becca65d chapter 1 . 8/26/2013 That was a sweet brotherly story |