Reviews for Mine |
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Wragziez chapter 1 . 11/12/2016 Really enjoyed reading this, thank you very much for sharing! |
PersonifiedParanoia chapter 1 . 7/1/2016 This is a great story! I do hope you continue this. Thanks. |
Meli79 chapter 1 . 5/31/2016 Love it so much please make more |
J chapter 1 . 3/16/2016 Omg yandere Haru. YANDERE HARU. This is life! Thank you for this fic :DDDDD It's very sweet in a twisted way :P |
gayswimmingbabes chapter 1 . 1/2/2016 Ahhhh yessss. My guilty pleasure is definitely yandere!MakoHaru. This was so delicious. IT FED MY SOUL MWAHAHHAHA 3 I loved this so much, dear. I needdd more. /heavy breathing |
This Username Is Classified chapter 1 . 12/19/2015 OH HARUUUU sooo /squeal |
chocovic-chu chapter 1 . 11/10/2014 Yandere Haru . . . Just an hour ago I read an interview about Haru-chan being waterdere (or mizudere?), and then this . . . When he said "Mine", I felt his possessive-ness came out full force; I didn't know I should consider Makoto lucky or not . . . Thanks for sharing! |
NeitherSaneNorInsane chapter 1 . 10/9/2014 I was just gonna say. Haru was being kind of yandere. And I kind of liked it! There was this one other fanfiction which had a slight yandereHaru but it was angst an it made mako sad so I didn't like it much (even though the writing was amazing. It was just the plot coz I don't like sad endings) But reading a happy yandereHaru was cute. In a weird way XD |
deleted0101 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 Romance or bromance, it doesn't matter. I just love that Haru took such an active stance in protecting Makoto. Hell no, you don't go messing with my best friend! I'll use the power of water and drown your ass with vigour! D: Too good! Thanks for sharing. |
ATouchofWinter chapter 1 . 4/21/2014 That was so awesome! I love yandere-Haru! The ending was perfect. |
SwingingRobin chapter 1 . 2/12/2014 Awesome story. I love it when Haru gets angry. Especially for someone else. Nice job! |
Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/2/2014 You should definitely do more stories like this! Dark!Haru is so sexy and wonderful and you're an absolutely brilliant writer! Keep up the good work |
Hayashi Yuri chapter 1 . 10/6/2013 Scary Haru is S-C-A-R-Y...O.O |
alexandriabeatrix chapter 1 . 10/1/2013 I absolutely loved this. It was very well-written. Your humor was great. I especially liked the second paragraph's "The lake ... Or something like that. Haru isn't very good with metaphors." That made me laugh out loud. Even the dark humor was well done. I loved what you did with "Unfortunately, their school doesn't have a pool and the sea is too far. Too bad." and "Haru absentmindedly noted that it's a good thing the school building was almost empty; no one would hear him scream." All in all, it was such a great read. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors, and the characters were not OOC (It seems legit that Haru might do something like that if anyone ever bullied Makoto). Good job! [Sorry for the overly-quotation-filled review. Haha. But I really enjoyed this story. :) ] |
Ri-Ryn chapter 1 . 9/15/2013 Hot damn, that was intensely wonderful. That line was so stern. "Suck on this." And then he proceeds to half drown him. Ah! I LOVE fics where either Makoto or Haruka protect each other from bullying and stuff. You should make one with it being Makoto's turn! Yay for Yandere!Haru! Ri-Ryn |