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Jason Todd?

hm

How did their fighting not alert the entire school

I am really disappointed in your story you made us believe that you were a BB and Raven fan but you were only deceiving your readers. Why is Raven falling for red x if she is in love with BB and why are you making BB her second choice if she can't be with red x this is just disrespectful to BB who has done nothing but stayed loyal to her while she can't decide her own feelings ad at the end she was getting too close to x and allowing him to kiss Her! Wtf. This is unfair to BB. This only proves that Raven is a hypocrite. In that case she didn't deserve BB. Next time you write anything don't deceive your readers make your pairings Clear. And red x is Jason Todd lol I don't know who cooked that up because there is no proof or anything of that. Just some stupid fangirls and their stupid fantasies. And u based the story on the scene from the comics where Todd knocks out Raven with an anesthetic doesn't mean that he is in love with her he just remembers her advice. You fangirls will pair anyone with anyone with out understanding the characters itself.

this was a grate story and im shocked you made me actually ship Rven and X but of course im beastboy raven person. all in all very well done.

I stopped reading at the end of the last chapter because I really don't want her to do something regretful with X. I'm in a constant state of suspense.

Your fat fuck narcissism seems to overpower the story in this one.. I wish you got your fat mexican head out of your tiny ass but it seems to be shoved up there pretty deep. Do you honestly, still think you can open a comic book store in your home town? lmao ! ... good luck, hope you get the wiff of failure once that ever happens..which it wont because ur not that retarded. You'll probably work some stupid job.. and thats ok too. As long as you're happy.. but still. I hope you can someday get ur fat mexican head out of your tiny asshole. That'd be good. 9 stars out of 10.

Adorable

I love this chapter !

Spent 97% of battery life to read this story. 100% worth it.
Loved it!

LOVED THIS. OMG. love the last chapter. BB is the cutest little shit ever xD looking forward to reading the sequel

Sorry it took so long for me to finish this, but it was a nice story. It was suspenseful and fun and all of the characters were entertaining. Now that you were able to educate a little on the problems I had I can appreciate Beast Boys characterization more than I did. You're very good at writing and any faults with your English were very subtle. I hope you write more in the future. I'm actually planning to check out your Ranma story right now. Good luck to you on your future works.

Mr. A

Ah, Robin being a bit of a jerk yet epic at the same time, knowing exactly what to say in the right moment. Great job capturing that side of him! I usually find this persona of his so off in other fanfictions.

CupidKirby

On the contrary, I think Red-X is hilarious. In an awesomely enjoyable way that makes this story a lot better kind of way.

CupidKirby