Okay hold up. When Arthur got stabbed in the show, he still got like three days. Now in the story Merlin has like a minute? Is it Becuase he's a creature of magic or did you just want to get this over quickly?

I like the story line. My only thing is the timing is off. You said six months so unless Gwen was pregent during the last battle their son wouldn't be born yet. Also six month olds can't talk yet. Other than that it was good.

(Last chapter)
YAY FREYA WOOO
YAY THEYRE GOING BACK TO CAMELOT YAY KILGARRAH
(This chapter)
AWWWWWW A BABY
YAY THEYRE HERE
AWWWWWW ARTHUR XD XD XD GO GWEN
awwww gaius
AWWWW AMHAR

STOP MAKING ME CRY

AHHHHH IM CRYING awww go Aithusa awwww kilgarrah:(:(:(

I love that ending
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you wrote 'SHE looked me in the eyes' and then 'one thought on HIS mind'. since this part is in Merlins POV, even only the last paragraph, is she a girl or a boy in this story? im confused

I can't leave your page without a comment. Your story is sweet but to short. I would love to read more from you.

I would love to see Merlin showing Amhar his magic...

Omg awww!... now I just want a fic purely consisting of Merlin playing with Amhar and the dragons lol

This is the most beautiful amazing adorable story ever

Ah amhar is so sweet!

This is good, and I do wish Merlin hadn't ended how it did, but I do prefer the real ending to is one (keep in mind that the original was written by many professional writers trained to make us cry), though I don't find either particularly satisfying. I think it ended incredibly sad, especially for something by the BBC.
Was that supposed to be Amhar's first word? If so, that's really cute, but "Dragon's" shouldn't have an apostrophe when used the way you did.

This is so much happier than the real ending.

And of course the boy doesn't care about the people-he wants the dragons! It must be Albion's version of dinosaurs...

Great story! Thank you so much for posting it!