This is great and hilarious, but also really needs a second part. Dealing with Miranda removing Kelly from the fishtank. Because that might be the most hilarious thing ever. XD

Oooh this was funny as hell! Hahhaa loved it!

ahahahahaa! This story was really quite funny, there's some great one liners in there

cool story

You are a genius. Freaking, hilarious genius! I could barely contain my laughter from the moment Liara was on the Normandy and on. Truly, brilliant.

Hahaha, this story is awesome! I mean, who'd even want to cheat on Liara anyways? And I definitely agree that anyone who pisses off Liara 2.0 would have no self-preservation skills. She is not someone you'd want to mess with. O.o

It was an amusing story to read, for sure and many smiles were had. Though I take some issues with emboldened text, since it seemed slightly confusing. There seemed to be a little pattern to it.

Also, I kinda like Kelly and I think you really don't. I don't think she deserved this kind of treatment, but it was fun watching non the less. And a chance to see more possessive Liara was well worth it.

So, all in all, a good read.

*lmfao and wheezed* homg, this is brilliant! XD

Haha brilliant! Thanks for the story.
On a side note, like the kid before me said seeing Mirrandas reaction would be worth another chapter.

I like jealous and protective Liara! Great job with the story, it made me smile and laugh. It was a nice breath of fresh air :)

Oh my gosh, that was brilliant. :D Thanks for the laughs. Poor Kelly, though I suppose she should feel thankful that Liara gave her the scuba suit at least. Great stuff!

Damn Liara! you scary :)
I really would like to see what Liara 2.0 would do to Traynor and her flirting :D
On a side note I think Miranda's reaction to seeing Kelly in the tank would be hilarious XD

well..i believe you managed to perfectly describe Liara 2.0
now all she needs to do is something similar with Sam when she gets to close in ME3 :)

LOL! That's awesome!
Enjoyed Feron outstubborn-ing Liara and getting her to go take a break, the little teasing banter between Garrus and Shepard, and the scene with Jack, Grunt, and Shepard :D