Reviews for Unofficial Reprimand
JAG'ed Bones in the Casckett chapter 1 . 4/4/2018
love this
kcat1971 chapter 1 . 3/28/2018
Just realized I've never left a review on this. It truly is one of my absolute favorite West Wing Stories. You completely nailed all three characters. This could easily have been a scene on the show. Excellent work.
Bearmauls chapter 1 . 8/31/2017
I really enjoyed this. Might have short-circuited that immensely frustrating Josh vs. Donna arc in the election too!
Saffy chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
Really believable scene between three characters who are all bound together by much more than the job. Another chapter would be welcome:)
chai4anne chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
This is a lovely little scene, that shows the underlying affection Toby has for both Donna and Josh, and leaves us hoping that she's a little closer to realizing how much Josh does care about her. I'm so glad you decided to post this!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
Wow! This is so powerful, and so real... way to go!
Angela M chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Damn if your West Wing stories don't make me me want to start watching the show. This story also makes me think of the old adage, "this hurts me more then it hurts you", because I get the feeling that Toby is rather fond of Donna. Very good read, I rather enjoyed that.
sassie69 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
This was well written and I could imagine this actually taking place.
lcf328 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Wow - great fic! And a necessary conversation.