i don't really understand why Alice had to be trained now, when she already tasted Bella's blood and didn't lose control to her bloodlust at all before.

and why would you change Rose's origin story? why take away the fact that she didn't want any part of her rapists inside her? I always thought that was a fundamental part of her character.

Honestly, I find myself quite disappointed with how this story ended... the first part was so amazing. i loved everything about it. but as soon as Victoria and the newborn army and fleeing and fighting came back into the mix, the story just felt rushed. if it had just been the increasing appearance of smaller slip ups and mistakes I would have just looked past that, but the story just changed so much somehow. I can’t really describe it but it doesn't even feel like the same author wrote it.
I really loved the first half of this story but I'm not sure I want to continue with the sequel when it'll probably be more like this second half.

I kinda like the twist at the end, though I kinda knew it was coming. the way you set it all up with Jane...
I just also hate that you would make Alice hurt Bella like that. why the fuck would she leave like that? she knows first hand how horrible it is to wake up alone after the change. and for her to tell Bella she loves her and chooses her only to leave right after? I just can’t really see Alice doing that. Did she have doubts? was she trying to convince herself that she wanted Bella more? I don't get it. With how much Alice loves Bella, how could she hurt her like that?

Emily and Emmet are both Em now?

wait. they graduate BEFORE they have their exams? is that normal? how do u get ur diploma before taking your final exams?

I thought Bella was already accepted to a university in Alaska? and now she says she missed the deadlines for even applying?
i love this story but the last few chapters have been getting sloppy

and didn't Alice hunt a bit much on the trip? every day seems quite excessive. not even Edward hunted that much when he was around Bella
Is it because she got turned on that much?

this chapter is a bit confusing. when they're at the tree they're leaving the next morning but when Bella wakes up they suddenly still have the rest of the day?

"well, I'm here aren't I?" dude. pain.
your writing is incredible. I haven't been able to take a break from reading so far. sorry I didn't even take a moment to comment until now.
I was too immersed in the story.

Bella is so fucking gay and she doesn't even realize it :D

Hi closer to the top half of story one you made a little mistake you said harry when his name is henry

That’s complicated bittersweet ending. Now please give me the sequel and finish write it dear Author! It’s just damn Bella is so tough and she deserve her happiness too

Drama is coming

Sad everything i feel so sad for Bella glad that she close w Rose now

Poor Bella

Holy shietttttt noooooooo omg I feel dejavu

Why I smell dram coming...