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   catspats31 chapter 7 . 12/16/2018 The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story: Entries not allowed: 5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc. You should remove all of the elements related to the reader and replace them with a canon character or original character. Switch to first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it is allowed like Archive Of Our Own. |
| DangerousSenpai chapter 7 . 4/14/2017 I'M DIEING FROM ADORABLE CUTENESS MUDEROUS OVERLOAD! Ahh~ |
| Molly Mundane chapter 5 . 1/10/2017 OMG! This was too perfect! Poor Al! |
| BubblesGoesPop chapter 2 . 11/29/2016 the writing is great but the reader-insert seems unnecessary I was hoping for a fluffy 2p face fanfic so I'm very disappointed |
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/6/2016 OMIGAWD THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ CAN U MAKE MORE PLS K THANKS |
| ThatTrueHetalian chapter 7 . 3/16/2016 Oh My Gosh! THIS CHAPTER WAS AWESOME! Yeah Al and That chick were doing "Big Kid" Stuff! |
| LillianNovakJones chapter 7 . 12/27/2015 Awww~~ |
| LizardGabe chapter 7 . 6/28/2015 Please continue! This is sooooo good! I love it! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/30/2015 I like this |
| FireFox Vixen chapter 7 . 5/4/2015 Love! |
| Nesia-chan chapter 7 . 4/26/2015 please continue, i like the kid personality XD, also i want to know what happen when the kid turned 15/16 |
| American-Pisces chapter 7 . 4/21/2015 Aww this story is so cute and psychopathic! I adore it! I love the family interactions, I hope there is more coming! |
| Edith chapter 7 . 1/16/2015 This book is amazing!I hope Japan, Germany, and Italy shows up soon. Great writing skills |
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/30/2014 Don't worry about the image I can imagine it and its actually funny! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/6/2014 This is the cutest story ever. You should write more. |
