Reviews for Eventualities
rinxlenfan4ever chapter 9 . 2/10/2016
...Sequel to this. ASAP.
rinxlenfan4ever chapter 3 . 2/10/2016
SEBBY. STHAP. GO BACK TO YOUR OWN ANIME/MANGA/FANDOM. GO GO. XD
PT-chan ssu chapter 20 . 9/4/2014
Ok, I know this review will definitely be SEVERELY lacking just how much I love and adore and over all LOVE this series of fics (EACH AND EVERY ONE X333)

But I just reeeeally wanted to say just how much I LOVE this fanfic, how Beautiful every chapter was, how interesting the plots were, how mysterious some was, how dreamy the narration was, how in character Ib and Garry are, how cool your view on their daily lives are, and the beautiful prompts/expressions before every chapter XDD
Ok, yes. I basically just LOVE THIS FIC! XDD

Thank you for writing such beautiful drabbles x33
Phantom Thief Fee chapter 2 . 6/12/2014
These are really good so far. You're good at this.
Zephyr169 chapter 20 . 1/21/2014
I loved it! Thank you for writing them. -
Vanarella chapter 20 . 1/13/2014
Aww, I haven't been reviewing much AT ALL since I forgot about this story, but it is soooo sweet you mentioned me in the Notes! -tackles and hugs you- I really love your writing, it's very splendid and you're just like a professional. You're actually one of my most favorite authors here and I really look up to you! MY FANFICTION SENPAI ;D; I hope I can be as good as you one day, but I'll practice more! I'll look forward to your new GarIb stories, so keep writing! (Also, sorry for the late review, haha... -nervous laughter-)

- Vana
AugustusFeuer chapter 20 . 12/31/2013
Awww... Why did it have to end...
But it was, as your friend said, fulfilling. Their reunion was very touching, words can't describe this last chapter. Thank you for sharing this! :)
ONNMT has moved chapter 20 . 12/31/2013
N'aww... So cute, and such a fulfilling ending. Having all of this round off, where they first met but then were first split apart, was such a great and heart-warming idea. All of this, from the course of emotion to the familiar phrases, just tied in, and knotted the bow on the gift that was this series.
Thank you.
-ONNMT
P.S. Happy new year -Soft smile- -Hug-
AugustusFeuer chapter 19 . 12/31/2013
Ah! I'm back... Chapter 18 was plain sweet, I don't have much to say about it. But chapter 19, whoa, Garry, I wish you're teaching in my school! Both chapters were very nice! Keep it up! :D
ONNMT has moved chapter 19 . 12/31/2013
AWWWWWWWWWW!
GAH, it's just the cutest! Brilliant start, and it kind of reminds me of the, 'open your locker and presents flood out' scenes in anime! Those listed qualities about Garry were /very/ true, and, yay!, it's the return of Ib's confident friend! Ib-chan is just so adorable and sincere! And were those roses hinting something, hmmm? -Smirk-
GOOD JOB! -Garry thumbs up!-
Keep going, doll, you're almost there! Just remember to get some sleep after, k? -Wink-
ONNMT has moved chapter 18 . 12/31/2013
Aw, another chapter, just for me? Kyu, youre too kind! nwn For the record, you are an awesome writer, and also a sweet friend :P And, yes, youre forgiven! This actually worked out better than my original idea would have.
Ib is so cute, and sassy mama Ib is so... sassy! XD And also the return of onii-chan Garry! You lolicon, you! x3 Mika was adorably described, and then Ibs, "Can... Can we have lunch with the nice onii-san?" was the icing on the cake!
Very well done!
ONNMT has moved chapter 17 . 12/30/2013
Awww... Cute but mysterious. Having Ib as a Hostess is a different approach, and having Garry take her home that night was unexpected, but wholly welcomed.
Good job :3
AugustusFeuer chapter 16 . 12/30/2013
Well, damn. I'd wait for your new chaps but I'm already late for sleep as it is, though our timezones aren't that much different... (The globe's such a bitch!)
But anyway. The last chapter was brilliant, and I like how they don't mention each other's name. Loved it as always. I'm sorry I can't write walls of texts, but I hope this makes your day.
And I kriffin' agree with your friend, you deserve more reviews! I'd tell my friends, but they probably don't bother with RPGs... Bleh.

Keep writing awesome and take care!
Reg
ONNMT has moved chapter 16 . 12/30/2013
Oh. My Gosh.
Omigosh, omigosh, omigosh! -Jumping up and down in excitement-
I- Omigosh!

Ok, ok, this, was just /outstanding/! I can't believe that someone as good as yourself, has not made one, but /two/ chapters dedicated to me! I'm really honored! -Bows-
Oh, gosh!

First, the foreign prompt... thingy. "Palvi". I saw it on FaceBook yesterday, and it just works with this chapter! Ib was portrayed sooooo well, and her dry, shy and awkward demeanor is so amusing, but adorable at the same time! The details about her glasses were written in so well, and they became a part of her; like they'd always been there. The, "Curse her short stature" made me giggle, because I can just see her, glaring up at the high shelf with a pout. Her independant attitude just gave off the 'I don't want to be a burden...' cute factor, as well as the nibble on her lip as she tries to reach that one shelf, teetering on the unbalanced stool. She's just so modest and timid, so I grinned at the idea of her staring at the full back pockets of somebody's jeans. It's classed as a mini-clique, but it makes me squeal everytime, and the way you wrote it was pure brilliance! And then, as she's apologizing, she forgets to get off her savior, and when she does, she almost completely forgets them as she fumbles and frets for her glasses! It's almost ditzy!

Her well-mannered self then berates herself, when Garry, almost hypnotized, interrupts her with, "Red." (Perhaps he remembers her after the Gallery, I realize now as I scream in ecstasy at the idea) And, of course, Ib over-thinks, and starts listing all the possibilities ("Her face, her eyes or her glasses?"), [not realizing what it is that he recognizes]. Then, her internal scream. He's one of the younger professors! I literally gasped, mouth widening in disbelief as I continued scrolling through, eager to read more! Oh my God, that was a stroke of genius!

Then, the little details; like how his hand dwarfed hers when he aided her in picking up the scattered books, or how short she was compared to him, were just /brilliantly executed/. And /then/, him asking if he'd taught her before, since she looked familiar? I did a double-take, 'cos I almost missed that one! Ib flushes so much, while Garry just grins in amusement. I can just see, that if this was an anime scene, Ib would have those classic, dizzy eyes and frizzled hair. Then, he just laughs good-naturedly, lightening the atmosphere as Ib's eyes soften embarrassed-ly when seeing how open he was. With the temptation of coffee, her little heart skips a beat, her eyes widening slightly, before they return to their natural size, her heart slightly quicker in pace, as she accepts his offer...

I really can't thank you enough! To go to all this trouble, and produce such /beautiful/ pieces of work; I don't deserve it. Is there anyway I could ever repay you? -Hugz-

P.S. And /another/ update later today? You spoil us!
P.S.S. How in the bloody hell do you only have 30-odd reviews? You deserve more! D: You are the image/writer of amazement!
ONNMT has moved chapter 15 . 12/30/2013
I- I- I! *Fangirl squeal*
Omigosh, I love you so much! -MEGA GLOMP-
Words just can't describe it! This was so so sooooooo well-written, and even if you changed a few details, this worked out even better than I thought it would!

Directionally-challenged Garry was portrayed /perfectly/! The inclusion in Starry Night was a subtle, but brilliant detail, and I can imagine him clambering over the balcony! The description of the Christmas lights were brilliant, and his silent "Oh." gives off so much "Oh god, WTF, why, world!" in it! It was such a silly mistake, even under the influence of alcohol, but it just makes him even more adorable! The "What was /wrong/ with this place?!" made me laugh, as well as the hilarious image of him, /damn his family name/, jumping up and down, waving his absurdly long arms in the air whilst screaming and shouting in distress for help! It's just- Oooh! xD

Also, Ib. Sweet, sweet Ib. Her sharp attitude and almost tsundere reactions were a mix between 'be wary' and 'she's adorable!', and her cut-off sentence was just timed so well, and just- just- Ah! -Glomps Garry plushie- The fireworks were beautifully described, as was the atmosphere, and Garry's approach to everything - at the start, so as to not to startle her, and then his internal chuckle and musings - just complimented Ib so well; at first, he helped us readers see her on-edge attitude, and then, later, he just highlighted Ib's cuteness. Oh, and the detail about how her hair was styled for the occasion, and how Ib was sniffing at his expensive cologne were nice and complimentary touches :3

The ending, with Garry laughing dryly at his luck is just so in-character and typical of him; especially when he ponders on what her parents would say. Then, just to top all of this off, he ventures on, lighter in heart, vowing to find the exit.

Oh, Gosh, I just can't describe it! Thank you, thank you, thank you, so much! :'D
I really can't thank you enough! Thank you!
*Rib-crushing tackle-hug* KYUUUU! X3
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