| Reviews for A Little Older, A Little Wiser |
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   claymore78 chapter 41 . 6/14 It was a nice read. Thank you for putting the time and effort. |
| Alysia Of The Pen chapter 41 . 5/9 Ahh, sweet resolution :D I really loved that Darien had an internal freak-out like Serena did, and that both of their fears could be neatly addressed. This was such a good AU! I loved reading it. If I have a criticism, it's the inconsistent spellings of things like Tsukino and a few grammatical errors. I'm sorry for the six-month gap in my reviews, I had to put a lot of things down due to work getting intense. I did think of this story often in the interim. Thanks for sharing it with us! :D |
| Alysia Of The Pen chapter 40 . 5/9 Removing those specific memories is a very good idea that I wish had been used in canon. The idea of that crystal future hanging over them for the rest of the show was always . . . weird and limiting. Even if it eventually comes to pass, it can be authentically theirs instead of a paradoxical loop of duty. |
| Alysia Of The Pen chapter 39 . 5/9 ZOISITE! Ah, awesome :D Rini and Helios are charming together too. And Nephlite is totally right, Lita, but I doubt she'll listen ;) |
| Alysia Of The Pen chapter 37 . 5/9 That transformation description was so beautiful! The whole Serena/Rini fight is beautiful in the purity of its thematic focus. (And I'm glad Helios is okay.) |
| Alysia Of The Pen chapter 36 . 5/9 Mina/Malachite and their tsun-tsun crap, ahaha. Wait, did Healing Activation kill Helios or just knock him out? |
| Alysia Of The Pen chapter 35 . 5/9 No lie, coming back to this after six months, that recap was REALLY helpful. I love me some evil Rini, and I'm still so curious about how/why Helios is caught up with her. Also love whenever a fic brings in the idea of Dictator Serenity. It's a fascinating concept to play with, even when the fic itself isn't saying that's the reality and just plays with it as a perception. |
| Wicked Lovely 17 chapter 41 . 1/3 LOVED IT :D |
| Alysia Of The Pen chapter 34 . 11/2/2019 They just stole Malachite straight out of his office. Love it! Rei's decision to follow Serena's method was very nice, showing how they do rely on each other despite the fighting. |
| Alysia Of The Pen chapter 33 . 10/1/2019 "I don't think he ever forgot." I audibly gasped and said "NO!" |
| Alysia Of The Pen chapter 32 . 9/21/2019 This chapter gives us just enough info. It's mysterious and suspenseful. I'm so excited to keep reading! |
| Alysia Of The Pen chapter 31 . 9/19/2019 Hell yes Rei! Never mind, THIS is the best-done chapter. |
| Alysia Of The Pen chapter 30 . 9/19/2019 I think this is your best chapter yet. Her father feels a bit OOC, but it's part of the premise and we hadn't seen him but briefly for the rest of the story. |
| Alysia Of The Pen chapter 29 . 9/19/2019 The laughter-breaking tension trope is nice, but it felt too soon to use it again with the same characters. I really hope they talk about Molly, or mention Lita's feelings about it. |
| Alysia Of The Pen chapter 28 . 9/19/2019 Nephlite and Lita can be so corny. That's not a criticism of your writing, but a comment on their characters. They honestly just are that way. I really like the older Serena in this fic. There's a solemnity about her that I missed in the anime and could only enjoy in the manga in snatches. And it's not that she's an unhappy person, she's not really despite the sadness of her high school years here, but she's realistic too. |
