this story looks awesome but there are words missing and the grammar and spelling needs fixing

Now as much as I love a good Akane bashing fic I think that this needs a rewrite as you totally skimmed over many of the major NWC players like Ukyo, Happosai, and even Moose.

Changes indeed

Interesting

Awesome

Come on Pata Hikari

Defend your queen!

Lol

Guest

Akane blackmailed Ranma on the wedding day!

Quit making Akane out to be a saint!

Guest please spell check

Actually guessed if you read the Manga Akane good blackmail him into marrying her.

"If you don't marry me I'm going to make you regret it for the rest of your life."

Does anybody remember that?

She is not really any better than other girls so it really bother with my mind on how she can have her worshippers in the comments.

Ranma should go red pill.

Talk about bouts of randomness.

A little hard to read due to the grammar and misused words but a good story concept overall so I liked it.

We're sick of Ranma and Akane together all the time.

hehehe nice

FIRST OF ALL THIS STORY IS FULL OF SHIT YOU MAKE AKANE LIKE SLUT AND DON'T LIKE RANMA WHILE SHE IS THE ONLY ONE WHO REALLY LOVE HIM THE ONLY THING THAT MAKES SHAMPOO INTERSTED AT HIM IS THAT HE BEAT HER HECK THE ONLY THING THAT MAKES HIM KNOCKED HER THAT HE TRIED TO PROTECT AKANE AND THERE IS DIFFERENT BETWEEN LOVE AND OBSSESION

IN THE END AKANE DON'T USE DROGUE OR TRY TO BLACKMAIL HIM TO MARRY HER NOT LIKE THE OTHERS YOU FUCKER

Lol
I hope you do more of this be it a sequal or this, great work