| Reviews for Original Sin |
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  Nice chapter 6 . 8/6/2017 Nice. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/9/2016 Cliffhanger again. I want you to update this, dammit! Or maybe you could let someone adopt it? I was actually writing something with the same plot when I stumbled on this. Except it's the opposite. You know, Silver, the all-knowing criminal mastermind. Gold, the normal teenager that does something stupid and gets caught in the underground. Yeah, that. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/9/2016 Wow. Great cliffhanger. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/9/2016 How cute? I'm still confused though. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2016 This is perfect. I would say it's gold, but that pun is just too bad to be put in such a masterpiece as this. Though I'm a bit confused. Which personalities are they following? The games? Because they don't seem it match up with the manga characters' personality. |
| fubja chapter 4 . 10/4/2015 Great story! Cabt wait for the last part! Will you update soon? :) |
 judaiandjohan chapter 4 . 7/26/2014 Oh my god, this is so good. I can't wait till the next chapter. Please don't end it yet, it's so good. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/24/2014 A stop at this point of action? So mean... |
| fire chimeara chapter 3 . 6/4/2014 00 - omiarceus! |
| azure blue espeon chapter 3 . 3/22/2014 Aw, cute. Anyways, my favorite line of this chapter, "Nevertheless." For some reason I just busted out laughing when I read that. |
| A chapter 2 . 2/3/2014 This is epic. It's funny, it flows and it's interesting, not to mention the characters are extremely real. The text and story and intrigue pull you in and you want more more more. Also I love a fic that makes you shiver and laugh at the same time. Great job! |
| MissMileyRaion chapter 2 . 12/5/2013 Oh my gosh... I'm in love. Holy fuck. Wow. Um... yeah... I'm sorry, I'm just in a bit of a cluster-fuck over here. Jesus Christ, my ovaries... It's okay, it's not like I needed them anyways. It's what you're not saying that gets me, you know? No, you don't, don't listen to my crazy. Anyways, I like this, if you couldn't tell, and I demand another! JK, JK, just, whenever you can, please update? Pretty please? |
| Spheals chapter 2 . 11/7/2013 WOW I HATE MY PHONE anyways I am a sucker for realistic progression so I'm more critical of that stuff. It's still a good read though! |
| Spheals chapter 1 . 11/7/2013 Well I didn't expect to see someone trying this AU as well. I've a mafia au in my backburner for a whole now, except no Pokemon in it. It's kinda weird how you're involving Pokemon in it actually, like I don't really understand. But it's still good! The interaction is great, Crys is lovely and I love her, but the progression is a little too fast. I'm just a weenie for telati |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2013 Oh gawd this is perf (u_u) |
