Well, I swear on the styx that I havn't read the next chapters yet. I have an assumption that Percy's mentor is The Great Mother Rhea. I mean, with two lions flanking her sides and everything..? But I'm just guessing here.

Great job. I really like how well you handle each character while making it feel authentic

I love the portrayal of triton in this story. I also think he should have had a bigger role in the original books. In the short time he was there, Uncle Rick made him out to be the bad guy. But in this, it’s rather the opposite. Even if I recognize him as noticeably arrogant, in this he is actually quite wise and I believe him to be very important to Percy’s character development. Keep up the good work!

I have been many yeaarsss late. Almost the next decade. But the stories make me happy. A lot. Nice style of writing. Different too. Though around chapter 15 it was mess of with so many plots running simultaneously. I really thought you wouldn't be able to clear it up. But I was happily surprised. Well done. I dunno if you will read this, but I hope you will be as happy as you made me while reading this. Kudos

Incredible... simply incredible.

This is my new favorite story/series in the entire PJO fandom. It builds and expands on the world that RR "created" so, so well. I love how many characters there are each with their own goals and histories. I really hope you keep writing. Thank you so, so much for creating this story.

Great story

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The mentor is Rhea , I think. Nice plot by the way. One of the best fanfic I have read . And pls make it perzoe
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I still think Bianca should be paired with percy, not zoe, I mean she's a faithful hunter who is loyal to artemis

I want Percy and Bianca to get together

"Jackson Nightshade stop slacking" if i was there it would take all my will power not to snap

I didn’t write any reviews with your story “sun championed “. So I continue reading your story and I fall in love with your story. Awesome

The Romans trained those gladiators who possessed a great degree of amidexterity, to fight with two swords. These men were considered the cream of the crop. They were called 'Dimachaerus' (singular). For Percy to be trained (or, especially to train himself!) on this two handed sword technique would be a great feat, indeed!
And one more thing; it's "Teach". Not "Thatch". Edward Teach, aka Blackbeard.

I disagree with your thoughts on Artemis yes she has killed many but she has also saved many and gives young girls homes and family besides she is not evil nor is she perfect but she has done good and bad stuff maybe you should add at the end or in the middle her changing her views and not trying to kill Percy or Zoe trying to kill him.

Also, I didn't read the first book, and I found the story really enjoyable. It added to the intrigue of the characters. I would recommend reading the first one last as a sort of prequel.