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WHAT DO YOU MEAN

HOW COULD YOU STOP WRITING THIS

WHAAAAAAAATTTTTT DO YOU MEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

...TT . TT My life is over, I'll never get to see Rin make out with Haru ever again

I liked it, please update.

Book why oh why my baby rin and my hair why fuck you seijuurou fuck you . I love this story please update hai.

Agggh this is such an interesting plotline, I'd love to see it continued!

Please write more!

Ooh interesting start e u e

I SERIOUSLY CANNNOT WAIT FOR MORE

Well... This could be interesting! Most of this chapter seemed to be more sweet, motivation gaining time for the protagonists. But then the ending came and "surprise!" Wonder what happens next...? Well, update soon!

Mackerel is actually really nasty

This story needs to omg find ma Berries! omg hoohahaohah! found ma Berries jk

Oh my god, this story is soooo amazing, I love it! It should deserve much more attention from people!
Your writing is also awesome and I really love the twists and thrills in the story! Especially the team (mainly Haru) being in danger now!
I'm really curious about the continue! What Haru's parents will do and what wil happen at the tournament.
Good luck with the writing :)

Must save Rin so that him and Haru could have cute kids with killer teeth. And their parents sound too fishy, maybe they are being controlled by evil. I think we are being bamboozled somehow. Try harder author!

Looks like shit just hit the fan... Again. Please update soon.

Noooo get them out of here they'll ruin the plans everything!