Beautiful!

CUTEEEEE

That ended rather quickly. Though I am saticfied without you going into unneeded deatil, i had thought the resolution would have been more indepth. Is he staying up there with her? What do his brothers think? Do they even know that he left yet? And what about Kirby O'Neil? Oh, boy! LOL. Overall, very enjoyable. Ending the story with lights in the sky and Donnie staring at her was a nice romantic touch. Thanks for the story.

O my... such a welcoming and intimate moment in time. Again, with the hot and cold playing an important part in this story. I've always loved Donnie's trepidation with April. It's so innocent and honest and it just makes me love him more. This chapter just paints a happy, soft-glowing picture. I enjoy seeing them this way in thier first moments.

With where the 2012 series is now, I can see this happening very easily. Mr. O'Neil, taking a job that would get him and his daughter out of New York in its disaster state. She wouldn't have protested too much. Her sublte longing for Donatello andher acknowledgment of it is appreciated. It's usually the other way around. I love to hear her take on thier delicate relationship.

First of all, love the imagery. You brought us in very hot from her nightmare. Then, you made me keenly aware of the quiet and cold. Well done. April is solitude, I'm already interested.

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT AND LOVE IT

Just beautiful.

Such an adorable story! I will be following. :)

It's so fluffy, I'm gonna die! But seriously though. This was just absolutely lovely and cute and charming and sweet! I love it. Good job!

This was lovely. Wonderful job.

awwwwwww

The Aurora Borealis. And Donnie will always be with his beloved April by his side. So tender.

Donnie made a long trip just to be with April, the love of his life.

Poor April! She thinking about Donnie and he is no there by her side.