From what I understand, Raven's mother killed her and is kinda regretting it? anyway, it was good, though a bit angasty

i love it

. if you don't stop trying to get even with the world, there'll be a repeat of the mirror incident.

The evil queen is soooo evil she doesn't have a heart shes a monster why did she kill her own daughter

Your such an amazing writer keep it up

OOH! So sad and creepy! Yikes! I love it, though! Rock on!

* sob* Well that was sad.
I DONT GET IT WHY DOES EVERYONE WRITE STORIES ABOUT RAVEN DYING?

Well now I just want to say that your summary was not true. That woman is heartless. Someone needs to push her out a window.

Oh, Raven...

I started crying in some parts
I thought she has killed Apple but it was Raven I just loved the twist. So if Raven was the fairest what happend to Apple .
I think I get it the Evil Queen maybe killed Apple so she could be the fairest again but then the mirror said Raven was the fairest and well the evil Queen lost how heartless
You are a great writer I cried at the end

This was so beautiful. The emotions were so real and close. Gorgeous.

beautiful i cried

this is so beautiful I cried

... that... wow. That was dark. Nice job.

Gosh.
This is perfect.
At first, I thought she had killed Snow White...but Raven? What an incredible twist!