Awesome story - thank you!

Absolutely wonderful!

Michael and Fi's conversations with in Charlie this fic (and especially this chapter) are both heartbreaking and hilarious. Thanks for giving some of my favorite characters the full epilogue they deserved.

*sniffs* That last paragraph makes me want to cry and hug all of three them.

Aww. This chapter got me all choked up.

*chuckles* Thanks for writing this. The conclusion of Burn Notice was so bittersweet and open-ended. This fills in the gaps nicely. I especially like Charlie unintentionally making Michael reflect on his action by talking about Thomas the Tank Engine characters. :)

This story is wonderful. I really enjoyed it and needed it. I hope you will consider going on with the story. I know all of us "burners" would love it. Thank you so much!

I really enjoyed the picture you painted : ) Wonderful story - great storyline! Happy to have run across this fandom : ) Fantastic writing - thank you for an easy read full of spelling checks and proper grammer - could you translate the irish to english? I tried but my mobile dictionary app would not respond. Thanks again!

Very nice story. I enjoyed it. :)

Ship toilets are awesome flushers. A toddler boy's underwear will go right down with the whoosh, by the way.

Anyone who says staying at home with a kid is easy has never stayed home with a kid. I think kids are hardest, though, when they're dropped on you when they're a little older, like Charlie. When you have a newborn, you train and gear up like you're going to run a marathon. Get a three year old dropped in your lap for the first time and you may as well just admit early on that you will fail, and the most you should hope for is to keep the kid alive. Nicely done.

Ah, yes, the preschooler freak-out in the car seat. I know it way too well. Nice chapter.

Love the infant seat confusion and the duct tape workaround.

Love the makeshift binoculars and the lesson in castle sieges and defenses. Hysterical.

Very nice. It hadn't occurred to me that people on the run would need to be wary of those "helping" them, but it makes perfect sense. Looking forward to reading more.